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Title: He Rides (MP3)
Post by: a.hughes on September 10, 2005, 11:56:40 am

This is an incomplete song I'm working on.
I'm sorry about the 'he rides' words being alot like 'she floats'. When I started to record this one I decided I needed some words in the chorus part as I didn't have one already, and 'he rides' is something I sort of just blurted out. It will almost definately change when I finish the song.
The voice is very soft in this as I had my iRiver on my lap and not near my mouth.
And forgive my totally untrained voice!

http://www.factionresources.com/downloads/he-rides.mp3


He walks alone
Through ghostly streets
Where the moonlight
And cold chill meets

He rides alone
He rides

Title: He Rides (MP3)
Post by: Emmyspiano on September 15, 2005, 01:27:29 pm

youre voice sounds better in this one

Title: He Rides (MP3)
Post by: NoelleNC on September 20, 2005, 08:11:53 pm

I really like the piano in this one, very catchy.