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Not to mention, she's only dancing for herself right now.

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Creative Endeavors / Re: Rain
« on: March 17, 2010, 04:50:14 pm »
Thanks, I think I will. I'm writing music for what I have now, I need a little musical inspiration. xD

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Completely Off-Topic / Re: Recent Pictures Thread Part 3
« on: March 16, 2010, 05:35:45 pm »
Link if ya' can't see.





HAHA. I just out-uglied everyone. 8D

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General Vanessa Carlton Discussion / Re: You guys DO realise....
« on: March 16, 2010, 04:49:29 pm »
Honestly, while I'm 100% with Nessa, I don't think she was trying very hard. Not that she botched in on purpose or anything, but that she didn't care to be there. Which is a big mistake. To the other thread now. <3





















Just sayin'. ;)

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I had one based on Fairweather Friends a few days ago. 8DDD; That's the product of listening to it on repeat for 3 hours before bed.

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Creative Endeavors / Rain
« on: March 14, 2010, 09:49:44 am »
Sitting here, bored out of my mind, and so I wrote a song. Not very good, but I dunno. Maybe I'll send in a demo or something once I get a few decent songs.

Rain

Walk the road to a new age,
Rain is falling, I’m alone,
Even though I turned the page,
You seem to think that I’m your own

I’m half a world away from you,
Left a year or so ago,
So why on earth are you chasing me,
When you knew I had to let you go, let you go?

[Chorus: It’s not my choice, not my choice
Just something that happened on that road,
And when I seem to lose my voice,
Rain is falling, I’m alone]

Nothing left to say or do,
What you’ve done is bad enough,
And I could never see the truth
That I was never made for love

Oh, made for love, no, no

[Chorus]


[I'm also not done yet.]

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General Vanessa Carlton Discussion / Re: What date will this be?
« on: February 25, 2010, 01:42:31 pm »
I'm not sure where the March / first day of Spring rumor started, but I don't think it's true. I think it'll come out as soon as the album is ready, since she doesn't promote much.

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General Vanessa Carlton Discussion / Re: 2010-Notes For Vanessa
« on: February 06, 2010, 09:24:43 am »
Well, if she does stalk here, then good luck with the new album. And put Waltz on it, not many people put instrumentals on albums but it's too nice not to. <3 Alsogolookatmymusiconhere.

LOLJK. But still. Good luck. <3

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General Vanessa Carlton Discussion / Re: Impatient
« on: February 06, 2010, 09:22:48 am »
Oh please do stop whining. ; ; It's a bit off-topic here anyhow. Anyhow, I hope it comes out soon, I'm finally getting tired of listening to HaT on repeat. xD

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General Vanessa Carlton Discussion / Re: Future featurings
« on: January 29, 2010, 07:40:21 am »
Sara Bareilles, KT Tunstall, A Fine Frenzy, Ingrid Michaelson, Feist, Lenka, or Coldplay would be fantastic. <3

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General Vanessa Carlton Discussion / Re: Vanessa on Twitter?
« on: January 23, 2010, 07:37:18 am »
At least she's still alive and.. voting.. o_o;

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Oh, thanks. xD Glad the download worked well. Sadly, nothing else yet. After I recorded that I've kinda been stuck in a writer's block. There were supposed to be vocals for that song, but I couldn't think of anything, and it sounds nice anyhow. xD

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Other Musicians / Re: Anyone listen to Erin McCarley??
« on: January 21, 2010, 07:40:08 am »
I found her a year ago. xD Love, Save The Empty. Great album. <3

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I'm home alone all of today, and with no car I've been stuck doing homework and studying for midterms. So I decided to write a song for piano, so more of an instrumental actually. And it came out kind of nice. Ignore that one mess-up towards the beginning. Free file download, and I made sure there were no viruses. <3

Waltz of the Seasons

All rights are reserved under a Creative Commons, so you steal and you die. o uo

No sheet music available.

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Creative Endeavors / Re: New Cover of ATM
« on: January 17, 2010, 09:02:54 am »
First off, it's very good. :3 Your piano playing is exceptional. And the fingerings you used for this work perfectly, so none of it sounds awkward.

Now, when you sing "and I need you, and I miss you," it's a bit out of tune. I want to say you're about a half pitch sharp there. Now, when you hold notes, use vibrato, otherwise it'll come out off-tune as well.

This part is just speculation: When you write songs, or even make arrangements of them, all of the instruments as well as the voice should be able to stand-alone -- without any other backup -- this works with your piano, but if you were just to sing, I think it might come out rather odd.

But still, it's a very good job, and I hope you don't take my critique too harsh. <3

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