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Completely Off-Topic / Yoga

« on: June 11, 2003, 03:10:16 am »

my dad does yoga!  

okay...i realize that no one wanted or needed to know that...so, umm...i'll just be leaving  :oops:

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Creative Endeavors / Which is your fave poem by me?

« on: June 11, 2003, 03:04:33 am »

well...i think that 'Murder' was great, but i can't really relate to it...'Many Emotions' was great too, but a little too dramatic...so for me 'Lost' is the best one.

hope i helped  

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Completely Off-Topic / Anyone want a sig?

« on: June 10, 2003, 12:30:56 pm »

I'll make the sigs when i get home...

fanks  

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Completely Off-Topic / Anyone want a sig?

« on: June 10, 2003, 10:44:18 am »

can i have one please?  

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Introduce Yourself / Hey...newbie here...

« on: June 10, 2003, 08:34:06 am »

lol @ Jason

hey Jen!  

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Creative Endeavors / Disappear (feedback please...)

« on: June 10, 2003, 08:31:30 am »

thanks Mal  

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Completely Off-Topic / Could use some cheering up...

« on: June 09, 2003, 01:16:55 pm »

hey gina, i'm sorry to hear that things are so bad for you and your family right now. there's not really anything i can say that everyone else hasn't...

i don't really know you but i am here if you ever wanna talk about it, or just be friends.

much love
- Tia

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Creative Endeavors / What I love about you (dedicated to all nessaholics)

« on: June 09, 2003, 01:08:16 pm »

hehe...welcome...

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Creative Endeavors / Disappear (feedback please...)

« on: June 09, 2003, 01:04:04 pm »

thanks...it's my latest in a line of like 25 songs...lol...
i only just started writing this year...  

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Introduce Yourself / just changed over...

« on: June 09, 2003, 10:40:46 am »

hey  

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Introduce Yourself / Hi, another newbie here

« on: June 09, 2003, 09:07:45 am »

hey steve!

welcome to the forum  

i didn't discover VC til late last year...so i'm kinda with you on the 'newbie' thing...

hope to see you around

much love

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Completely Off-Topic / Happy Birthday BlackVulture!!

« on: June 09, 2003, 09:02:38 am »

a very belated happy birthday!

 

much love

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Creative Endeavors / The Race

« on: June 09, 2003, 06:51:51 am »

i think it's really good!

keep writing!  

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Creative Endeavors / "MAYBE"

« on: June 09, 2003, 06:49:19 am »

it's great!  

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Creative Endeavors / Disappear (feedback please...)

« on: June 09, 2003, 06:46:32 am »

Disappear

She lingers in the doorway
Not knowing where to turn
Gazing into the fire
That she wants
But fears will burn

She is afraid
Yet all is crystal clear
She can see the end
Within her reach
So far, yet so near

She calls out for help
But no one comes
Tears stream down her cheeks
Her heart breaks
And her soul numbs

She is afraid
Yet all is crystal clear
She can see the end
Within her reach
So far, yet so near

She begs
And she pleads
She screams
And she bleeds

She is afraid
Yet all is crystal clear
She can see the end
Within her reach
So far, yet so near

She whispers her last words
To unhearing ears
Then she steps forward into space
And disappears…


some feedback please...