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Winter Solstice, Spring and Fall
« on: October 05, 2007, 06:02:34 am »
I wrote a song with this title four years ago, but I completely reworked it last night. It is no longer fiction and is really, really important to me. It felt very good to write :D

Winter solstice, spring and fall
A better life, a greater call
I can feel the summer's fading
And crickets chirp outside here
I stand poised, always waiting
For your attention to divide
'Cause now, alone and on my own
It's easy to think what haunts me
Could dessimate the dreams of home
That I may never see

Trapped inside a snow globe world
We twist and turn, we spin and swirl
I watch you as you flutter past
Your visions moving much too fast
And lives apart as we may be
You never flew too far from me

Winter solstice, spring and fall
Seasons pass without your call
Crystals form around my window
Then wash away into the spring
And time has made me tamer
And old feelings start to fade
My stubborn heart removes the blame
From choices you once made
And suddenly I smile again
Picturing what might have been

Trapped inside a snow globe world
We twist and turn, we spin and swirl
I watch you as you flutter past
Your visions moving much too fast
And lives apart as we may be
You never flew too far from me

But as choices come and chances go
And melt into the fallen snow
Love becomes timeless
And memories shine
And our faded colors show
True, though years will pass
We'll hold onto our best
My tears will never show
And I'll never let you go
*natalie*



at least i can say
i was not afraid
i loved you all the way
i'd pick the fool any day.

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Winter Solstice, Spring and Fall
« Reply #1 on: October 05, 2007, 10:46:39 am »
Wow, this is fantastic!
There's especially bits and pieces that I'm in love with, like this line:
"My stubborn heart removes the blame"
sig & av by natalie, thank you!

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« Reply #2 on: October 05, 2007, 11:57:42 am »
thank you :D
*natalie*



at least i can say
i was not afraid
i loved you all the way
i'd pick the fool any day.