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My vanessa carlton poem
« on: June 28, 2005, 01:01:47 pm »
its pretty crap and cheesy. i never usually write poems, but i felt like it 2day. :)
it plays on lines from "the one", though that wasnt my intention. ah well :lol:
so here goes (cringes and runs for cover) :?


She can be the golden girl
Bringing sunshine to my world.
Harmonies of joy and light
Swirl around me day and night.

Yet she can be as dark as coal,
Burning deep within my soul.
The blackened gloom she can induce
Help the tears and fears come loose.

I hear such passion when she sings,
And that is what her music brings.
She touches deepest in my heart
With her beauty, grace and art.

Sounds of soothing melodies
Stream from her piano keys.
With talent that outshines the sun,
Vanessa Carlton is the one.

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My vanessa carlton poem
« Reply #1 on: June 28, 2005, 02:43:03 pm »
Aw that's so pretty!   :D It's a great poem, and I love how you incorporated a 'the one' lyric into the frst and last lines. Tis truely a masterpiece!

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Re: My vanessa carlton poem
« Reply #2 on: October 08, 2009, 07:34:57 am »
Wow, this poem has a better flow than my own poems. Nice work!
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Re: My vanessa carlton poem
« Reply #3 on: October 09, 2009, 11:42:02 am »
This is fabulous! I love it! Well done.

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Re: My vanessa carlton poem
« Reply #4 on: October 09, 2009, 06:35:41 pm »
This is really good :D

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Re: My vanessa carlton poem
« Reply #5 on: October 12, 2009, 08:00:40 pm »
It's really cool !
I made her a poem, but..I don't speak english very well. The poem is in portuguese...I'm sorry.
"Bendito seja quem te trouxe a esse mundo enquanto eu ainda estava nele", Nessa. "You're the sun that breaks the storm..."