this is the first poem i've ever written, i wrote it last night. tell me what you think. it probably seems a little amature, well that's because i've never written a poem before. lol. tell me what you think
btw, i don't have a title for it, i don't know what to call it
She was hurt
It had happened before
A secret
She couldn’t tell
Wouldn’t tell
A boy
Her friend
Found her secret
Saw here secret
He was scared
Angry that he didn’t know
Didn’t understand
It was a mess
Blind
How could he not see?
It was right there
How could he not see?
Wanted
He wanted to do something
Had to do something
He cried
It wasn’t fair
She didn’t deserve
It wasn’t right
He told
She didn’t want
But he told them
They were concerned
They cared
He cared
A call
They called
Away
They took the evil away from her
Gone
The evil was gone
Scared
She was still scared
Finally
It was over
Finally
It was finally over
whatchya think?
Amanda
