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Julie

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Can't Sleep At Night (poem)
« on: May 31, 2004, 01:24:14 pm »
Can't Sleep At Night!

Why do you always mock me little boy?
Well, you know I could knock you little boy!
I may be little
But I'm tough
I may not show it
But I can be rough
I'll put you in your place
Make you look at my face
See my discrace of you
How could I have loved you and not realize?
Your true colors - they come and go
But this time I'm truly sayin' no

Yeah, make fun of me
Kiss her lips
Rub it in
But you'll see what'll happen
You'll think about me
All day
You'll get hard at the sight of me
You'll wish for me when you look at her
Your bitterness took it's toll
I'm the only straight girl who'd probably say no
And I hope you roll around in bed
Trying to get me out of your head
You'll toss and turn
The memory of me will forever burn
Yeah, you'll want me back
And I bet you can't sleep at night!

Say it again
Make me feel ugly
You won't change
My self-esteem
I don't follow the flock
And you live by it
What a shame to be of that
You can only be good alone
But around others
You need a thrown

You must think you're slick
You must think you're smooth
I'd laugh if the whole school made fun of you

And I bet you can't sleep at night!
"If only I could get into that corner of your head."

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Can't Sleep At Night (poem)
« Reply #1 on: May 31, 2004, 08:25:37 pm »
I loved this one!!!!
I just comment if I really like the thing, and I soo loved this one
it`s beautiful!

It has the right ammount of anger and sarcasm :wink:
good job!

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Can't Sleep At Night (poem)
« Reply #2 on: June 01, 2004, 04:48:58 am »
I agree, beautiful Julie. That and all your poems. Great job  :) xoxo

Thank so much for the sig Scotty!! <3 It's gorgeous!

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Can't Sleep At Night (poem)
« Reply #3 on: June 01, 2004, 12:31:14 pm »
Quote from: "Julie"
You'll get hard at the sight of me


LoL!!!!!! I'm so immature, haha

But right, it is a very good poem! :infinity: