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Tiger Baby

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This is stupid...but oh well
« on: January 21, 2005, 05:13:47 pm »
Tell me what you think!!!!! Be honest..It doesn't have a title...not yet.


I can't even look at you
It hurts too much
Too many memories rush back
Everytime you glance my way
My heart freezes
Deep inside i'm dying
Even though you broke my heart
Part of me still longs for you
Knowing we'll never be
We don't even talk now
My heart goes numb
Thoughts of suicide rush through me
Mixed emotions....
Twisted and confused....


Thats bad..but oh well I felt like posting a poem.

~~andrea

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This is stupid...but oh well
« Reply #1 on: January 21, 2005, 06:01:45 pm »
Yay! Andrea is back!

I love it!
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This is stupid...but oh well
« Reply #2 on: January 21, 2005, 06:03:45 pm »
Yep, I'm baaaack!  :D

Thank ya!

I've done better...but eh...yeah....la la la

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This is stupid...but oh well
« Reply #3 on: February 01, 2005, 07:25:49 pm »
i like it!! its definatly NOT bad! :D

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Re: This is stupid...but oh well
« Reply #4 on: February 06, 2005, 05:18:57 am »
Quote from: "Tiger Baby"
Tell me what you think!!!!! Be honest..It doesn't have a title...not yet.


I can't even look at you
It hurts too much
Too many memories rush back
Everytime you glance my way
My heart freezes
Deep inside i'm dying
Even though you broke my heart
Part of me still longs for you
Knowing we'll never be
We don't even talk now
My heart goes numb
Thoughts of suicide rush through me
Mixed emotions....
Twisted and confused....


Thats bad..but oh well I felt like posting a poem.

~~andrea


I'd call it " My life is a shit "
All of bad happens in this song


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« Reply #5 on: May 05, 2005, 07:36:11 am »
Poems can be less great than others, but none are necessarily bad.  Anyways, I actually really liked that one because it's very relative to me except for the suicide part.  Make sure that if you feel any kind of suicidal thoughts you deal with them in a therapuetic way.  No one should make you feel that way.
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