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Pretty Baby (my version, a poem)
« on: June 07, 2003, 12:47:15 pm »
They stared deep into eachothers eyes
Why the met? They don't know why
It was their destiny they thought
it was love that they sought
Love was a game, they always lost
Not now, not anymore
Love at first sight, when she walked through his door

Pretty baby, please stay with me I've been waiting for you
Pretty baby, can't you see? That I really adore you
I'll be the embrace that keeps you warm
I'll be the sun that breaks the storm
You'll be alright
And I'll sleep tight
As long as you keep coming round

I love you. Please just hold me
Your an artist, you mold me
You're my life, my hopes and dreams
I soar on eagles wings
You're my pretty baby
could we get married someday? maybe

Pretty baby, please stay with me I've been waiting for you
Pretty baby, can't you see? That I really adore you
I'll be the embrace that keeps you warm
I'll be the sun that breaks the storm
You'll be alright
And I'll sleep tight
As long as you keep coming round

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« Reply #1 on: June 07, 2003, 12:50:04 pm »
Its odd, I know. But please tell me what you think!!

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« Reply #2 on: June 07, 2003, 02:08:04 pm »
ppl! tell me what you think, damnit!  :evil:

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« Reply #3 on: June 12, 2003, 07:28:47 pm »
:cry: no one likes it!

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Pretty Baby (my version, a poem)
« Reply #4 on: June 13, 2003, 05:21:55 am »
i like it  :!:

sorry to be long to answer but you know ..............


holidays......... :roll:
brain is shut down  :D

keep writing , your poem is nice
perhaps i didn't understant 100 % of it but for what i understood it's good  :D
Thomas aka Dr Doolittle

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« Reply #5 on: June 13, 2003, 10:13:46 am »
LOL. Thanks, I'm really glad you like it!  :D


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