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« on: June 20, 2003, 03:44:00 pm »
My Own Way

It’s been six years now since I went my own way
I’ve been lost since that day
Always thought that all roads lead to home
So I’m on one today
But I can’t seem to find
My own safe place to hide
Six years down. Is that all that they got?
And we all run away

I’ve been waking up in this city of dirt
And I ask myself why…
Do I love her and why should that hurt?
Do I still have to try?
But I know she is mine
Cause I gave her my life
It’s hard sometimes but I’ll carry you home
And we all can’t decide

I’ve been falling down but I pick myself up
With the songs I have sung
Missed the bus that the other kids took
So I stuck out my thumb
And I’ve learned from that ride
That we all have to find
Home somewhere where we call ourselves home
And we all cry young
in this dream scene lost my rhyme scheme
won't you fall down on me sleeping
and i will carry you all the way

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« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2003, 05:04:37 am »
it's really good!  :)
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« Reply #2 on: June 21, 2003, 11:08:33 am »
I like it a lot: )
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