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my first post about a song i wrote
« on: July 01, 2003, 02:59:44 pm »
recently i lost my grandma so i decided to write a song in her memory...feel free to give back response...


Remembering You (For Nanny)

It's hard to imagine your gone
The memories forever kept
The day that you left, was hard on us all
Screaming that it wasn't true, I said...

Remembering You
Your Smile, Your Love, Your Touch
Comforting Me
With all of you
Now that your gone, it will be so hard
To go back, Remembering You...

The days I woke up at 6:30
You smiled and I knew, you loved me
Why did you go, so soon
Your love lives on, Inside me...

Remembering You
Your Smile, Your Love, Your Touch
Comforting Me
With all of you
I don't want to believe, but sadly it's true
I love you, remembering you

No one, could have asked
For a better friend
I'll miss you, for all time

Remembering You
Your Smile, Your Love, Your Touch
Comforting Me
With all of you
I've come to terms, with your departure
From this world that, Remembers you...

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« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2003, 03:21:05 pm »
awesome!! Great job!!

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nice one
« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2003, 05:27:58 pm »
good stuff :)
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« Reply #3 on: July 01, 2003, 05:55:27 pm »
:o makes me feel good that you like it...i just need help with my music...

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good
« Reply #4 on: July 02, 2003, 12:24:06 am »
many thumbs up  :wink:
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« Reply #5 on: July 24, 2003, 05:57:18 pm »
nice hehe