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DramaQueen

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« on: April 01, 2004, 01:32:00 am »
who are you
and whats that song you wrote
the words are nice
but the melody is a little lacking
it has no style
it has no rhythm, just a tune
and i think it needs a little bit of
dynamics
to set the mood

you make the music, and ill sing the song
write me a fairytale, ill play along
im not sure where we're going to
but thats the story of me and you

how are you
and what'd you do today
im not quite fine
but thankyou very much for asking
i need a cure
i need a remedy, a fix
for the mess inside my head and
its still growing
im still sick

so you lie to me, and ill lie to you
and ill tell you what im gonna do
ill wear the mask, ill act the part
and ill do what i can to spare your heart

because i love to shove it in and rip it out again
the dagger that is who i am
but i know somehow im everything you cant live without
so ill do what i can
bury my head deep in the sand
to stifle the demons trying to scream
and try to keep faking life in this dream
but my palms are secretly bloody
and i dont know how much longer
i can hold onto this
before my grip
releases

im letting go now while the going's still good
im letting go now because i should
im letting go now its for your own good
im letting go...
(im warning you, im letting go
come morning i am letting go)

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i dont know, its 430 am and my brain is rambling...

and ive just gone through a saga of epic proportions to get my internet back, so i promise ill make real posts one of these days...

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« Reply #1 on: April 01, 2004, 11:07:07 am »
Wow.  8O Totally impressive. You should always be awake at 4-something AM if this is what it produces. Not to say, though, that whatever it is you felt that caused you to write something so full of emotion and movement... not to say that it should always accompany you.

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« Reply #2 on: April 01, 2004, 12:02:10 pm »
Wow GReat!!!!

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« Reply #3 on: April 01, 2004, 03:53:37 pm »
awesome work  :)

Things are going crazy and I'm not sure who to blame...
November 9th 2004...H a r m o n i u m!!!
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« Reply #4 on: April 11, 2004, 12:49:30 pm »
Quote from: "Ms.Redd"
Wow.  8O Totally impressive. You should always be awake at 4-something AM if this is what it produces. Not to say, though, that whatever it is you felt that caused you to write something so full of emotion and movement... not to say that it should always accompany you.


thanks for the compliment *smallsmile*

and thankyou also for the rest of it...
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