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Stay the Night
« on: May 09, 2004, 12:30:49 pm »
Stay the Night

Please don’t go so soon
Nothing’s waiting for you
Stay the night
Leave in the morning
And if it’s without warning
At least we’d have tonight
The tick of the clock is ominous like thunder
I miss you already
And I can feel myself slipping under
Without you to hold me steady
And now I’m begging
Like I’ve never begged before
All that you’ve given has left me wanting more
And I’m begging
You’re not listening
And I’m down on my knees
Stay! Stay… please

Just love me for a little while
If that’s all that you need
Just to have you for a little while
Is good enough for me

And we’ll be like lovers
And we’ll fly through the sky
Forget the others—it’s you and me tonight
You build me up (you build me up)
‘Til my head’s in the clouds
Being with you is like taking a hit
I just can’t get enough of it
Then when I fall I’ll land in your arms
And I’ll shoot up again—it’ll do me no harm
So now I’m begging
You’re not listening
And I’m down on my knees
It’s not even a choice
Just stay with me, please!

Repeat chorus

So now you’re gone and I miss you
You wouldn’t even stay the night
And so now the aftermath sets in
And now I’m lonely… again
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at least i can say
i was not afraid
i loved you all the way
i'd pick the fool any day.

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« Reply #1 on: May 10, 2004, 08:40:32 am »
damn... that's really good! :wink:
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« Reply #2 on: May 11, 2004, 08:40:55 pm »
That was nice.  I'm curious what the notes would be.....  *wonders*  ..and instrumentation......*wonders*

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« Reply #3 on: May 11, 2004, 09:33:11 pm »
Quote from: "tylor2000"
That was nice.  I'm curious what the notes would be.....  *wonders*  ..and instrumentation......*wonders*

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(wonders about notes as well) :?  :wink:
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« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2004, 04:32:16 am »
well... we (me and my best friend) are making a DEMO (!!!!), and i start recording this saturday... maybe you'll be lucky enough to find out :wink:
it's sort of... maybe kind of jason mraz-ish? i'm not sure, i don't want to label us just yet. but i'll definitely be uploading the files as soon as they're done!

edit: you can read more of my lyrics here. there's three pages worth, and i have a guestbook, so tell me what you think![/url]
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« Reply #5 on: May 12, 2004, 05:05:35 pm »
jason mraz-ish? the lyrics dont say anything sarcastic or witty though and mr mraz is full of that. or if you mean his serious songs, they are extra especially poetic.

this seems more john mayerish haha... if you're thinking of a guy with a guitar.
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« Reply #6 on: May 12, 2004, 05:54:19 pm »
no, i mean the style in which they are sung.
not the lyrics. the lyrics are more natalie miller-ish.
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