A few songs I've written...

[VanessaCarltonMania]

This is a new song i wrote like 5 minutes ago! :lol:
Comment Plz!

Friends of foes are still her foes
and now there's left one question:
How did they know?

Blinded by the eery light she sees,
her soul sails through life
fluttering impatiently

Burdened by this mistake,
she can never forget,
until she can no longer wake.

So she sings a song
that brings along
the peace of mind she hoped for.

It's nothing new
this is something we're all used to
But now its time to go.



*this is dedicated to someone I know named Vanessa...*

[Morgan]

I really like the feel of that song.
Is it going to be a slower song?

[musician]

This is a new song i wrote like 5 minutes ago! :lol:
Comment Plz!

Friends of foes are still her foes
and now there's left one question:
How did they know?

Blinded by the eery light she sees,
her soul sails through life
fluttering impatiently

Burdened by this mistake,
she can never forget,
until she can no longer wake.

So she sings a song
that brings along
the peace of mind she hoped for.

It's nothing new
this is something we're all used to
But now its time to go.



*this is dedicated to someone I know named Vanessa... *

Wow, did you really write that in minutes time? That's awesome! I like it, specially: Friends of foes are still her foes and now there's left one question: How did they know?

If write a song, it takes about a week or so. I waste my times waiting till I got inspirations. The quickest one probably took one day, with a help of my friend.

[VanessaCarltonMania]

^^
Yeah, it takes me around 5 to 10 minutes...cause I usualy only write songs if I have an idea in my head and an inspiration....
The words just come to my head and I write them down! :lol:

Sometimes the idea comes to me when I'm out of the house, so now I keep a little note book in my bag and I write the idea or song down  :razz:

[VanessaCarltonMania]

I wrote this song yesterday night! :razz:

ALL SHE ASKS

Verse 1:
She's sinking fast,
grief swallowing her whole.
Distraught and lost,
this  is when she needs  you the most.

Chorus:
And you're never there to hold her hand.
She should've known.
She could never make you understand.

Verse 2:
Every breath she takes is for you,
please listen, she's telling the truth.
It might be her last breath,
and it's for you.

(repeat chorus)

Outro:
Look her in the eye.
Here eyes speak the truth.
Look her in the eye.
That's all she's asking you to do.

(the chorus might be repeated here....but then the outro would be Verse 3...)

[VanessaCarltonMania]

I really like the feel of that song.
Is it going to be a slower song?

i want it to sound something like She Floats....
cause its supposed to be kinda sad :razz:

[Morgan]

I really like the feel of that song.
Is it going to be a slower song?

i want it to sound something like She Floats....
cause its supposed to be kinda sad :razz:

Yeah, that's cool.
And I really like "All She Asks". It's nice.

[VanessaCarltonMania]

^^ thanks!!!

[VanessaCarltonMania]

new song i just wrote! (btw...i ONLY write songs when I'm in a certain reflective mood...which is happening now....so i will probably have brain freeze when I've thought everything through and sorted everything out :lol: LOL)* and this one is not as good as the other ones i wrote yesterday!*

Verse 1:
I see the future as you see the past.
I see things coming,
coming too fast.

Chorus:
So I sing a song
and you sing along.
Quiet nights,
baby, sleep tight.

Verse 2:
I hold your hand
and I sing that song.
You let me go, You let me fall.
How can things go so wrong?

(chorus)

Verse 3:
I blow a kiss
It lands amiss
I'm begging you to sing along-
My life is an unfinished song.

(repeat chorus)

bridge:
I'm begging you to sing along.
My life is an unfinished song.
Sing along, finish my song!

[Morgan]

I really like the chorus of that one. I love how it seems.
If you know what I mean.

[VanessaCarltonMania]

I really like the chorus of that one. I love how it seems.
If you know what I mean.

Yeah, i get what u mean!

Thanks!

[musician]

I blow a kiss
It lands amiss

Nice! I like that...

[VanessaCarltonMania]

Thanks!

[VanessaCarltonMania]

Verse 1:
He told me he was the hero who stole me
i was taken to a place where all dreams are happy
he took my hand and danced with me
i wanted to keep him, my sweet memory

Chorus:
he held my hand and walked with me
i wondered how he could see
the good in everyone
the good in me

Verse 2:
I never wanted to make him unhappy
And Im sorry now, Im so sorry
But what was I supposed to do when stuck in my misery?
Should he have just let me be?

Chorus

Bridge:
He'll always be my hero
never my thief
He'll always steel me away
away where i can remember when...

(repeat chorus)


   

-For SpiriT_SLASH
  THANKS!!!! (K)(K)-

[VanessaCarltonMania]

^^
That song started when i asked my friend (SpiriT_SLASH--> his nickname)
if he  was my hero or thief...?

and then he said :"im the hero that stole u"

so i wrote that song...

and btw i have got a crush on this guy...hes THE GUY thats in all my songs!
But at least i can send this one to him...and he LOVED it...and he actually helped me with a few rhyming words! :lol: LOL