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The Walrus
« on: March 10, 2008, 09:16:54 am »
"The time has come..." the Walrus said
"To talk of other things."

And I do

Breaking in is easy
Breaking up.....
Well, that's a different story

Ships, they don't sink as fast as you think

It takes time to hit a low
I'm getting there

The Format told me, "Sometimes, when sailors are sailing...
They think twice about where they're anchoring..."
Better think
Before you drop that anchor

Fore you can find yourself
In dark waters

But don't worry 'bout setting sail
The wind will always guide
Just trust it

"The time has come." the Walrus said...
"To talk of other things
Shoes, ships, ceiling wax
Cabbages & kings."

And we live like kings
At least from reality

And I'd spend like a king
At least til I was broke....(Ain't that the truth?!)

But I've got my smokes
My clothes on my back
Good company
And an entire ocean to sail!

I may not know where I'm going
I don't even have
A map

But I know, soon one day
I'll be anchoring

Find me a utopia
With a beautiful boy
And a castle filled with riches!

And I can count on that...

"The time has come..."

-Zach

And all the constellations, shine down on you and me...

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« Reply #1 on: March 14, 2008, 06:21:22 am »
THIS IS GREAT!!!
DID U WRITE IT????


OMG! ITS SOOO HOT!
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« Reply #2 on: March 15, 2008, 09:57:50 am »
Wow, I REALLY like that.
Seriously, thank you for sharing!
That's what she said.

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« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2008, 05:06:23 am »
That was really good! I loved the intertextuality ;D

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« Reply #4 on: October 11, 2009, 11:02:33 am »
Awesome!

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« Reply #5 on: July 08, 2010, 08:12:52 pm »
This is just awesome. So unique and precious.

Floating on the sea, stars are watching me. Currents take me out, what will be will be.