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Ms.Redd

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My first set of lyrics... About Killing an Ex.
« on: August 06, 2003, 02:51:49 pm »
Or something wierd like that. lol

My heart cooks
My fingers burn
Your song to me
Was all in vain
You used my love
You played a game
I'll have my chance
And when you pay...

I'll laugh I'll cry
Then I'll go on with my day
Cuz your so called love
Will hurt no one this way
Its fine and
Came just in time
Now take your lies
Close your eyes
And fade away

You've made a point
So have your laugh
At my expense
Justice be paid back
My love was true
And yours was fake
Now in my hand
Lays your final fate

So I'll laugh and I'll cry
Then I'll go on with my day
Cuz your so called love
Will hurt no one this way
Its fine and
Came just in time
Now take your lies
Close your eyes
And fade away

Your stare and wide eyes
Oh its just no suprise
And you thought in your mind
You'd get away...
When your tears fell like bricks
And your strength snapped like sticks
Just like twigs
You get sick
Then your gone

And I laughed and I cried
And I went on with my day
Cuz your so called love
Will hurt no one this way
Its fine and
Came just in time
You took your lies
Closed your eyes
And faded away

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Now please please please tell me what you think... I would really really really like to know.
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LimeTwister

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« Reply #1 on: August 06, 2003, 04:20:09 pm »
i wrote something like that..actually a lot of things like that!

lol but i don't think i have killed but one person in my writings....or maybe i have....lol


nice work!!!
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« Reply #2 on: August 06, 2003, 04:28:46 pm »
coolness!
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Thanks guys!
« Reply #3 on: August 06, 2003, 07:04:00 pm »
Glad you like it... Now if I could only get some one to gimme a beat. ! haha
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« Reply #4 on: August 06, 2003, 11:37:45 pm »
I love you Mallory! Don't kill! PM me instead!!!
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« Reply #5 on: August 07, 2003, 12:45:10 am »
dark...but kool
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« Reply #6 on: August 07, 2003, 06:05:09 am »
spooky, lol, is there a tune to it?
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« Reply #7 on: August 07, 2003, 10:31:15 am »
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spooky, lol, is there a tune to it?


Hmm... well thats what I'm working on.. I wish that I had some sorta computer thingy where I could make music, that would be awesome... ya know, sorta like what the girl from Coyote Ugly had... man, I can't remember her name. Anyways, thats not important, but yeah, I wish that I could have something like that... Be cool to try to actually make a song!

Is there any thing off the net that I could download when I get home that is something free and a mixing sorta program??

Well, if anyone has any advice, thoughts, or anything else, post!! :) :)

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ps-Alecs I love ya too! ;)
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« Reply #8 on: August 07, 2003, 11:15:44 am »
i had a beat in my head, lol...but to actually get you to hear what was in my head is a little impossible for me.
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« Reply #9 on: August 07, 2003, 11:24:38 am »
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i had a beat in my head, lol...but to actually get you to hear what was in my head is a little impossible for me.


nahhh! Its easy! Just go into programs/accessories/entertainment/soundrecorder . Once your there, hit the record button and start to bang your head on the desk... Be sure to make it loud, bang hard.

 :lol:

(yours truly,
    a hoo hoo)
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« Reply #10 on: August 07, 2003, 11:45:26 am »
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i had a beat in my head, lol...but to actually get you to hear what was in my head is a little impossible for me.


nahhh! Its easy! Just go into programs/accessories/entertainment/soundrecorder . Once your there, hit the record button and start to bang your head on the desk... Be sure to make it loud, bang hard.

 :lol:

(yours truly,
    a hoo hoo)


lol, yea that sounds like the advice of a hoo hoo....thanks!
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« Reply #11 on: August 09, 2003, 09:46:19 am »
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lol, yea that sounds like the advice of a hoo hoo....thanks!


hee hee, ... I mean... hoo hoo!!

lol, geeezzz...
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« Reply #12 on: August 09, 2003, 09:11:42 pm »
AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!! I'm working on music to it now thanks to Nicky (Gently Realistic) and it's SO COOOOOL!!

I'll figure out to post it and stuff when I'm done working on it!!!
:) :) :)

*is so happy now, to answer Michelle's question*
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« Reply #13 on: August 11, 2003, 06:19:31 am »
"when your tears feel like bricks"
i love that line
xoxox
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« Reply #14 on: August 11, 2003, 10:02:13 am »
if you want to make music, mal, get Cakewalk Music Creator 2003, it's easy to use, and makes good quality music.
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