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Leben - a german poem written by me
« on: July 10, 2003, 09:33:17 am »
Leben

Was ist es was man Leben nennt?
Gibt es jemanden der die Antwort kennt?
Nein - Ich glaube nicht
Jeder Traum zerbricht beim ersten Licht.
Tag für Tag nimmt jeder seinen Weg
Doch welches Ziel hat man;
dass man ihn geht?
Glücklich scheint er einen nicht zu machen,
zu wenig Menschen - die lachen.
Lebt doch jeder stets für sich
du für dich und ich für mich.
Zu gerne will ich teilen - Freud und Leid
Will erfahren was Liebe heißt.
Warum kann mir keiner Antwort geben?
Ich will wissen was es heißt zu leben!


I think you dont understand a fucking word but I just want show u that i can write poems.

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« Reply #1 on: July 10, 2003, 08:46:39 pm »
Well, it looks pretty.

Bravo! lol.

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Leben - a german poem written by me
« Reply #2 on: July 16, 2003, 01:48:41 am »
:lol:
Thanks

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« Reply #3 on: July 16, 2003, 04:50:54 am »
(can you translate that lol sorry)...

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« Reply #4 on: July 24, 2003, 11:56:40 am »
Ok I can try it but I can't promise that the poem is good English.
Next week you'll have the english version.

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« Reply #5 on: August 06, 2003, 08:04:59 am »
I understood "ist"
Joe

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« Reply #6 on: August 06, 2003, 07:00:24 pm »
it's good. i can tell it rhymes, but that's it.

lol, sorry, me no speak german


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