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Serenade (song i wrote for someone) tell me if its ok :)
« on: August 12, 2003, 05:49:31 pm »
Serenade



When i close my eyes
i think of you
but i know tonight
you think of her too

I breathe upon your face
and once imagined this
now we're in a place
where we both wanna be
I tried so hard
and prayed that you'd come
Maybe the feeling i have today
is your dreams inside of me



If you have a little faith and know whats true
There's that one love waiting there for you
but til that day comes i'll be by your side always
and sing to your heart that sweet song i serenade

Only time will past
if you wish and believe
That your fear inside of you
can heal up and leave
Don't give up to what you feel
No she can not tell you
and she didn't even see
the way that you cared
the pain she left ,
the one you share with me

If you have a little faith and know whats true
There's that one love waiting there for you
but til that day comes i'll be by your side always
and sing to your heart that sweet song i serenade

my heart goes on again and again
when you mean more to me
then just the wind beneath my wings
and in my life i never dreamed for anything
but that infinite love god will bring

If you have a little faith and know whats true
There's that one love waiting there for you
but til that day comes i'll be by your side always
and sing to your heart (oh oh oh) by singing to your heart
that sweet song i serenade

so what do you think? does it sound ok ?and  be honest please :?:  :?

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Serenade (song i wrote for someone) tell me if its ok :)
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2003, 07:58:31 am »
Jen, I think this is awesome.... really good. :)

I like the flow...

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« Reply #2 on: August 13, 2003, 08:22:18 am »
oh yea?..lol thanks!  :!: