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Gina

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« on: November 10, 2003, 07:20:38 pm »
What you do to me
You do not know
My emotions run wild
With just the thought of you.
Many miles keep from being together,
But someday I'll have you in my arms.
I keep wishing I could hold you,
Keep wishing I could be there.
I see you so unhappy, so depressed,
And I feel so helpless;
I want to do more to make things right,
But alls I can do is talk,
Try to comfort you through words.
My words will never be enough,
Enough to make you smile.
All that I want is for you to see,
That you have all that I can give,
All my heart, all of my soul.
...But that still isn't enough to make you happy.

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that is really jumbled and not gramatically correct i'm sure, but i just wrote it at this very moment... and wanted to get some emotions out.

Note: this will probably get rewritten when im not so scatter-brained like i am rite now. :(
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awww
« Reply #1 on: November 11, 2003, 10:17:22 am »
*hugs you*

thats awesome! really gd. i can totally relate to it. wow
i know the feelin, totally so thanks for that.

lisa
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« Reply #2 on: November 11, 2003, 11:38:48 am »
miss gina...that would make a perfect song!

I luv it!

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« Reply #3 on: November 11, 2003, 12:11:04 pm »
thanks lisa and joey :D

joeyyyyyy i wanna hear the song
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« Reply #4 on: November 11, 2003, 12:12:53 pm »
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joeyyyyyy i wanna hear the song


if i could get it to work!...ugh

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« Reply #5 on: November 12, 2003, 12:21:43 pm »
yeah that wud definitely make a perfect song. lol

i'll try to. lol i'll work on it

too tired right now