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« on: November 12, 2003, 04:25:44 pm »
this doesn't really flow well because it's the meshing of a song and a poem, but tell me what you think of what i have now:

You tell such pretty lies
so sweet it could almost be the truth
And I came to realize
over dinner the other night
I let you run my life
and you ran it straight in to the ground

well, that’s the price I have to pay
for wanting things another way.

And as my lips pucker
eyes water
throat choke in a silent sob
you smile
and everything became clear
this is how you like me.

Believe me when I say
it’s not suicidal
I just don’t want to live today
I know I can’t change things
I know it will stay the same.

And I’ll go on everyday
maybe slowly
learning to break away.

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« Reply #1 on: December 11, 2003, 01:17:57 pm »
hmm... this is old and never replied to ... and i never come in this forum ... but i just wanted to say jess, i think its kewl :)

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« Reply #2 on: December 11, 2003, 03:33:17 pm »
lol, thanks emily! ooo kind of ot, but i got the auto's today! thank you!!!!

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« Reply #3 on: December 11, 2003, 05:40:59 pm »
yer welcome.  ooh, and i am so glad u got them today.  i hope u like :)

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« Reply #4 on: January 08, 2004, 06:27:31 pm »
wow rock on!

love it!

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« Reply #5 on: January 09, 2004, 10:27:04 am »
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wow rock on!

love it!


 :) Thanks Bee