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I Bleed You
« on: January 08, 2004, 08:24:54 pm »
And I'm gone,
Melting in the Summer sun.
Wishing Winter would have come,
To save me.
I can't go on without you.
Stabbed in my heart,
With a bleak memory,
Damaging . . . Or losing all my senses.
The pull of confusion tore us apart.
Tear me apart.
Tear me in forths,
Because I'm not whole . . .

Your half, disconnected.
The I am thrown down and rejected . . . By you.
My half, My half,
My half of life to love, and hold.
And maybe . . . Maybe I'll carry on.

Our windows are rolled down.
My life was thrown down.
Summer is coming.
Fuck, Summer has come.
Lovers are dying,
And Merry . . . Merry fucking Christmas.

I remember when I fell in love with you.
I miss the feeling,
Of feeling.
I miss the taste of being in love.
And I, I've tried to avoid you,
But I can't take it.
Being without you,
I won't make it.

Because I can't breathe.
The windows are up and we keep crashing.
Crashing like your heart . . . Into my body,
And my soul.
I just want you to stay with me.
But Summer has passed,
Lovers are dying, and I'm not whole.

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« Reply #1 on: January 09, 2004, 10:28:25 am »
:cry:  this poem is really good, but makes me sad.

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« Reply #2 on: January 09, 2004, 11:31:07 am »
woah...pretty powerful. and saddening. *wipes tear*  :cry:

Things are going crazy and I'm not sure who to blame...
November 9th 2004...H a r m o n i u m!!!
Spare me just three last words, I love you is all she heard...

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« Reply #3 on: January 09, 2004, 12:24:36 pm »
Thanks, Chilluns  :oops:

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« Reply #4 on: January 09, 2004, 12:56:24 pm »
That's so powerful Cece!  :cry: Nice work!

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« Reply #5 on: January 30, 2004, 10:08:15 am »
Amazing.
-- there are people who take the heart out of you, and those who put it back in --

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« Reply #6 on: January 30, 2004, 10:12:41 am »
*whispers* wow...
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