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« on: January 26, 2004, 07:01:50 pm »
You picked a daisy out
Of a field full of roses
You don’t know what life possesses
You’re a dreamer, with big wishes

Cause you feel that way
With me
Cause you feel that way
With me…
I see your picture on a wall
And it hurts sometimes
I feel your presence
In me
And it hurts sometimes

My life
Has taken you for granted
Behind the mask
I hide 1,000 mistakes
And your daisy is a dreamer
And your dreamer makes
Big wishes

Cause you feel that way
With me
Cause you feel that way
With me…
I see your picture on a wall
And it hurts sometimes
I feel your presence
In me
And it hurts sometimes

Stars in your hair,
Gleaming
You’re in love
Take me to your
Piece of mind…

Cause you feel that way
With me
Cause you feel that way
With me…
I see your picture on a wall
And it hurts sometimes
I feel your presence
In me
And it hurts sometimes

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« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2004, 07:24:57 pm »
Joey, no matter what u think, its awesome, beautiful, great, sweet, and the best. good job  :)


August 7th 2003, the best day of my life.

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« Reply #2 on: January 26, 2004, 07:36:07 pm »
That is really really good.

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« Reply #3 on: January 26, 2004, 09:05:00 pm »
josef... for some reason, that made me cry.  thats incredible! you're unbelievably talented sweetheart.  Never lose hope in yer dreams, you seriously will be very very successful!  and by the way, i absolutely adore you! mwah bro!
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« Reply #4 on: January 26, 2004, 10:06:56 pm »
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josef... for some reason, that made me cry.


me too! i just didnt want to say it at first, but yea, it made me cry too


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« Reply #5 on: January 27, 2004, 08:14:40 am »
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josef... for some reason, that made me cry.


me too! i just didnt want to say it at first, but yea, it made me cry too


I have cried so much today already, thanks Limey! It is REALLY great, hard to put into words really, i love it- i hope the tour will be coming here first!
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« Reply #6 on: January 27, 2004, 08:26:07 am »
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josef... for some reason, that made me cry.


me too! i just didnt want to say it at first, but yea, it made me cry too


I have cried so much today already, thanks Limey! It is REALLY great, hard to put into words really, i love it- i hope the tour will be coming here first!


haha! well I will make sure to at least stop by enough times if I ever get a  tour.


Thanks everyone.

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« Reply #7 on: January 27, 2004, 09:37:14 am »
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josef... for some reason, that made me cry.


me too! i just didnt want to say it at first, but yea, it made me cry too


I have cried so much today already, thanks Limey! It is REALLY great, hard to put into words really, i love it- i hope the tour will be coming here first!


haha! well I will make sure to at least stop by enough times if I ever get a  tour.


Thanks everyone.


theres no if... you will... and i'll be there with ya for every show!  :razz:
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« Reply #8 on: January 27, 2004, 12:56:51 pm »
That's awesome Joey...*wipes away a tear*
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« Reply #9 on: February 01, 2004, 12:47:19 pm »
JB i love it.:-)

truly, it's very very good, and i could see it being a song

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« Reply #10 on: February 01, 2004, 01:55:59 pm »
wow... amazing Joey!!!  :D
Good job!!
"i'm willing to do anything
to calm the storm in my heart
i've never been the praying kind
but lately i've been down upon my knees
not looking for a miracle
just a reason to believe"