Author Topic: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet. (Read 4660 times)

sweetdang · « **on:** February 03, 2004, 06:33:04 pm »

“Ana speaks slow and quiet”
There is a song
that some hear
when seeing their face
in porcelain,
or their lies
in mirrors.
Striving for an absolute
they can never reach.
Starving for a perfection
they will never find.
Ana sings slow and quiet
while showing dolls;
many plastic passions.
When Ana crescendos
the world falls away
into a pulse machine
and healers words.
But after the tune,
in Ana’s silence,
all that’s left is
a wire frame and
a half beating heart.

clamicas · « **Reply #1 on:** February 03, 2004, 06:42:27 pm »

wow!! I liked it

sweetdang · « **Reply #2 on:** February 03, 2004, 06:43:45 pm »

Quote from: "clamicas"

wow!! I liked it

Thanks a bunch. ; )

topher8467 · « **Reply #3 on:** February 03, 2004, 07:42:05 pm »

Hey Crissy,

Might I know Anna?

T.

Tia · « **Reply #4 on:** February 04, 2004, 06:38:50 am »

Awesome... 8O

I love it.

divasteph · « **Reply #5 on:** February 04, 2004, 07:00:03 am »

thats one of the best i have read on here --- bravo!

clamicas · « **Reply #6 on:** February 04, 2004, 07:17:08 am »

Quote from: "divasteph"

thats one of the best i have read on here --- bravo!

yup, exactly

c'estlavie · « **Reply #7 on:** February 04, 2004, 10:33:24 am »

wow!!

that is so cool! well done sweetie

love ya

Lisa xxx

ps. reply to my emails!!

rosieposy87 · « **Reply #8 on:** February 04, 2004, 11:02:50 am »

Oh i really really liked it, the rhythm is good- in line with the mood of the poem. Seriously, its really good.

vanessafan18 · « **Reply #9 on:** February 04, 2004, 11:59:53 am »

Wow I loved that it was so good! Well done!

xoxoxox

sweetdang · « **Reply #10 on:** February 04, 2004, 02:09:31 pm »

;- ) Thanks guys..Tia, Steph, Lisa, Clamicas (again), Rosie & Vanessafan.

Nah, T. I don't think so...Though not anorexic myself, I really feel for those suffering, that's what this poem is about.

Gina · « **Reply #11 on:** February 04, 2004, 02:22:18 pm »

Wow... thats really good Cris! Nice work hunnie!

Tia · « **Reply #12 on:** February 04, 2004, 02:24:46 pm »

You're welcome C! *hugs*

Haven't talked to you much lately...where've you been gurl?!

jlmusicchick · « **Reply #13 on:** February 04, 2004, 04:16:01 pm »

that's awesome!

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Author Topic: Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet. (Read 4660 times)