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« on: February 12, 2004, 04:55:12 pm »
You opened a window,
To let air into your breathless lungs.
And I saw you staring through the broken glass,
Hopeless, and unknowingly wasting second by second.
You let me in and we started talking,
When you caught me by surprise.
And you look at me like . . .
No, no - You looked at me,
And that's when I saw it in your eyes.
I knew how desperately, I'd talk to you.
And without concern, deserted you.
But I swear, I wouldn't have, if I knew.

As I wish for Spring to race to me,
A wind cuts my face, and the world turns while I'm still.
And once again, I'm without you.
It's only been a year.
I thought it would have lasted longer.
And I'm hoping for Spring,
You both couldn't come sooner.

In my mind, your face is tattooed in black,
Along with how I treated you,
Like a mirage in a lonely void.
I'm again, alone.

We started talking,
When you caught me by surprise.
And you look at me like . . .
No, not again.
No, I can't be without you again.
I still remember your eyes staring back at me,
And the brilliance of your smile and face,
That told me everything would be okay.
But nothing is okay now,
And it's only been a year.
I thought it would have lasted longer,
And I'm still hoping for Spring -
You both couldn't come any sooner.

(A lot of words :\)

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« Reply #1 on: February 12, 2004, 05:26:37 pm »
*sigh* once again Cece, thursdayish, with a tinge of conor oberst. very good!

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« Reply #2 on: February 13, 2004, 11:52:49 am »
Cece :?

I cried...
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