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« on: February 23, 2004, 07:32:43 am »
Okay, should I sing verse one or verse two first? I kinda like the story, but I dunno if I should tell it backwards or forwards, which makes it more eerie?? I want eerie.

VERSE 1:
Raindrops fall to the ground
A little child wakes from a sound
And the speeding car, it spins out of control
Life's so wrong, but its just how it goes...

And the cold wind blows
Hearts pound,
Fears all around.
And the silence grows
Everyone feels,
But nobody knows...
What its like to be alone.

VERSE 2:
Raindrops fall from the sky
Another mile and I'll be alright
But right I feel I need to go out and drive
Ignore the fact I know I had too much to drink tonight

And the cold wind blows
Hearts pound,
Fears all around.
And the silence grows
Everyone feels,
But nobody knows...
What its like to be alone.

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I'm still messing around with it, and HAVE been for the past weekend. It's coming out, slowly but surely. So... verse one or verse two first???

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« Reply #1 on: February 23, 2004, 07:38:08 am »
That's awesome!!

I think you should sing the 2nd verse first, otherwise it doesn't really make sense...lol.
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« Reply #2 on: February 23, 2004, 02:58:09 pm »
Oooh, I added me another verse. :)

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« Reply #3 on: February 23, 2004, 06:10:03 pm »
i think 2nd verse first.

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« Reply #4 on: February 24, 2004, 09:43:26 am »
Quote from: "Ms.Redd"
Oooh, I added me another verse. :)


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