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Pirouette

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One of my 'mirror' poems
« on: June 30, 2004, 06:42:31 am »
"Certain people that really annoy the hell out of me" (okay, that's  not REALLY the title, but it could be! :P)
Punctuation n' stuff thrown in at a whim! Be warned. Cuz I don't care! :D


I'm like a mirror, but you see through me.
 you ignore me
instead of looking right into me.
You don't see me.
You see yourself when you look at me.
You see your fears
You see the things you don't understand
The things that disgust you
I'm nothing to you.
I'm what you've decided
I be.
Stupid
Ignorant
Unknowing
and
Brainless.
When I speak
You don't hear me.
I scream,
But it echoes back to me.
I bleed tears when you cut me,
But you'll never know.
Your cuts are invisible.
I cry blood as my tears
They taste like pain and unquenched rage
A torrent of emotions that runs through me
I see everything, but you don't see me
And this dis-intrest, disgust, distaste
Blows right through me.
Soon, there'll be nothing left
To see.

I have another one that is much nicer and didn't take less than five seconds to write. When I find it, I'll post it in here.


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One of my 'mirror' poems
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2004, 04:20:38 am »
I like it. It's short and sharp.
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« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2004, 01:04:34 pm »
i give it thumbs up
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« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2004, 12:25:16 am »
Me too, I really really like it!!! well done  :D

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