Perfect Piece of Innocence

[amberbeads]

It’s the time when I’m caught between sleeping and living
I love everything about you
And caught in the talons of my crazy dreams
There’s nothing I can do
But bask inside the fantasy of you at my disposal
And so I lay alone neither sleeping nor waking
Ignoring your refusal
To recognize I’m faking

Let me break you
Suffocate you
Love you and then leave you
‘Cause I can’t do nothing wrong
Trapped where I belong
I’m your dream and your nightmare
‘Cause you know that I could tear
Your heart out from your skin
But you still chose to let me in

It’s the time when I’m caught between sober and tweaked
That I want every part of you
And locked in a space inside my head
There’s nothing I can do
But bask inside the fantasy of you pressed up against me
And so I sit alone with smoke drifting from my hand
It’ll never make any sense to me
My twenty-three night stand

Repeat chorus

I’ve never gotten used to the exuberance you show
When you come home every evening and you find you’re not alone
You’re the perfect piece of innocence
Cast under my spell
And I’d love to tear you down to bits
But you might know me too well

[Mountaineer]

It’s the time when I’m caught between sober and tweaked
That I want every part of you
And locked in a space inside my head
There’s nothing I can do
But bask inside the fantasy of you pressed up against me
And so I sit alone with smoke drifting from my hand
It’ll never make any sense to me
My twenty-three night stand


When you come home every evening and you find you’re not alone
You’re the perfect piece of innocence
Cast under my spell
And I’d love to tear you down to bits
But you might know me too well

WOW!!!! love those parts!! Amazig job, Nat!!!!

[amberbeads]

Thanks You!!!!!!!!

[clamicas]

It’s the time when I’m caught between sleeping and living
I love everything about you
And caught in the talons of my crazy dreams
There’s nothing I can do
But bask inside the fantasy of you at my disposal
And so I lay alone neither sleeping nor waking
Ignoring your refusal
To recognize I’m faking

I loved that part
, tho I´m still not over that "Around the Sun" hehe, that was so amazing

[amberbeads]

Thanks, Clarice!
Around the sun actually has music!!! It sounds good, too! Now if I could only figure out a way to record it...

[dconfessional]

Wow! That's the best writing I've read in a long time! And, trust me, I read my friends' poems every single day of my life. Yes, they write well, but you've got talent, my friend.

[amberbeads]

Thanks so much! I love to write, I really want to be a musician

[Chloe]

And so I sit alone with smoke drifting from my hand
It’ll never make any sense to me
My twenty-three night stand

 8O

AWESOME. I love that part. you're really good at this. I want to be a musican too.

[amberbeads]

And so I sit alone with smoke drifting from my hand
It’ll never make any sense to me
My twenty-three night stand

 8O

AWESOME. I love that part. you're really good at this. I want to be a musican too.

Thanks! And good luck!

[Afterglow]

It's very, very .... I just don't know the right words to show about :oops:

[MyStellarParadise]

wow that was amazing, i'll be posting some of my stuff soon too....

[whitehouses81680]

B-E-A UTIFUL!


awesome job girle

[Ms.Redd]

My gosh. I don't know what to say to this. Its amazing.

[MeganJane]

You write really well, and I especially like your use of metaphors  

[amberbeads]

thanks, ladies