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me and my piano---tim

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« on: May 23, 2008, 05:36:40 pm »
Damn I really like this song, but I was singing it to a friend and he just started laughing! I think he was just being an asshole... but it got me wondering :/ It's not really finished yet

Star Spangled Banner

I will capture the stars tonight
They're mine.
Rocketing up in the dark, alright
I'm fine.

The Star Spangled Banner waves goodbye to me
Goodbye to me
I'm floating away from all the irony
Where nothing means a thing

Do you see the magic?
Even if the moment's tragic
Shed a tear for real love
Yea let it live and lift it up

The Star Spangled Banner waves goodbye to you
Goodbye to you
Rising up above with the love you knew
And nothing else is true

THE END lol

Actually, I still need to add a bridge. But I'm just curious as to any thoughts. Be honest!

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« Reply #1 on: June 04, 2008, 04:10:27 am »
very magical lyrics
it feels myterious, fantasy-like and dreamy

i like it a lot!!!!!!!!

it actually makes me think of vanessa's songs

i hope i can listen to it! have you composed a melody for it?