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c'estlavie · « **on:** April 02, 2004, 12:00:45 pm »

if anyone cud think of a name for this i wud be very grateful...

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There it goes again.....
Another piece of a friendship made to be broken
Blown away by lies and deceit
How long will this Jeckyll and Hyde act last?
How long until you see how much i love you?
I'll never stop loving you
I'm not sure i could if i tried
Without you i am empty
You make me believe there is more to life
I try to understand you
I guess i take the wrong path on the way
Cos all i find are dead ends
And bridges that i cant cross
I feel so helpless
All i can tell you is how much i care
But still we stand and watch
As another piece falls away

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Lisa xxx

clamicas · « **Reply #1 on:** April 02, 2004, 10:27:12 pm »

cool

u could call it "Broken", "How Long'',
"braking" "Watch(ing) it brake" i don't know i'm kinda bad with names :lol:

c'estlavie · « **Reply #2 on:** April 03, 2004, 10:37:01 am »

ok, i think im callin it "Broken". it was kinda the first thing that came into my head anyway, i just wasnt really sure about it. thanks for all ur suggestions. it was really nice of ya.

Lisa xxx

vanessafan18 · « **Reply #3 on:** April 03, 2004, 11:45:03 am »

Awww Lisa honey that is sooo touching! You little poet ess you! Broken is a really good name for it I agree!

xoxoxox

c'estlavie · « **Reply #4 on:** April 04, 2004, 12:56:47 am »

awwwwww thankyou georgie, ur so adorable, hehe. its really not that great, i just felt i needed to put it somewhere else instead of it just lyin about on my bedroom floor. lol

cos knowing me i wud have probably lost it, hehe

*mwah*

Love ya hun

Lisa xxx

Manda · « **Reply #5 on:** April 08, 2004, 02:33:22 pm »

*puts hand over heart*

lovely! :oops:

Manda

c'estlavie · « **Reply #6 on:** April 09, 2004, 04:00:20 am »

aww bless ya manda, hehe such a sweetie. glad u liked it *hugs*

Lisa xxx

tylor2000 · « **Reply #7 on:** April 09, 2004, 02:23:39 pm »

How about, "endship"...?

tylor

blueglove · « **Reply #8 on:** April 09, 2004, 04:50:24 pm »

Quote from: "clamicas"

cool

u could call it "Broken", "How Long'',
"braking" "Watch(ing) it brake" i don't know i'm kinda bad with names :lol:

agreed i like it!!! good job

c'estlavie · « **Reply #9 on:** April 10, 2004, 04:16:13 am »

thanks so much for all ur suggestions ppl, im glad some of u like it. i think im stickin wit "Broken". its just kinda simple and doesnt distract from the meaning of the poem.

i really appreciate ppl reading it tho

thanks again

Lisa xxx

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