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Ivy
« on: September 25, 2003, 12:36:48 pm »
Slow like ivy crawling up the old gate
You hold your breath and wait
Twining yourself 'round the place you call home
All hope has left
Your heart bereft

Because when dreams fade like daytime
And hope floats away like the clouds
Everyone tells you you'll be fine
Still you stand screaming to the deaf crowd
The ivy who tried to be a grapevine
Too quiet in a big world so loud

Fright'ning like an angry storm overhead
You close your eyes and pray
Destructive power not sure where to go
The world cries
Fearing your ivy no longer survives

Because when dreams fade like daytime
And hope floats away like the clouds
Everyone tells you you'll be fine
Still you stand screaming to the deaf crowd
The ivy who tried to be a grapevine
Too quiet in a big world so loud

The dreams fade like daytime
(And tomorrow's a new day)
Hope floats like clouds
(And clouds always form in new ways)
Everyone tells you you'll be fine
The ivy who became a grapevine
Who stood up and spoke just in time

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Hmmmm....
« Reply #1 on: September 25, 2003, 07:45:28 pm »
Thats good..... Nice:)

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Ivy
« Reply #2 on: September 26, 2003, 05:50:55 am »
That's amazing Mal...truly amazing...

I dunno how or why...or how to explain why it hits me so hard...but it's amazing...
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« Reply #3 on: September 26, 2003, 06:07:43 am »
good work

"Still you stand screaming to the deaf crowd"

I'm always listening Mal :wink:
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Ivy
« Reply #4 on: September 26, 2003, 09:01:33 am »
*claps*

I feel like a shadow
Walking behind who you think I am
Just like my shadow

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« Reply #5 on: September 26, 2003, 03:24:24 pm »
impressive once again mal!  :D  i alllways enjoy ur poems and songs :)  keep 'em comin! hehe
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Ivy
« Reply #6 on: September 27, 2003, 11:03:49 am »
The world cries.......

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« Reply #7 on: September 27, 2003, 12:55:25 pm »
Quote from: "Gently realistic"
The world cries.......


Yes, :) I did say that.

;)

Did you post that because you liked it or .... ?

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« Reply #8 on: September 28, 2003, 08:14:03 am »
Yes :)
Just a sad truth..... I Like that line. Good work.