Author Topic: Broken Pianos. (Read 7197 times)

me and my piano---tim · « **on:** April 23, 2007, 04:08:24 pm »

Okay here's another song I wrote/am writing... I don't think I'm done yet. Again, no lyrics... I suck at them and they confine me. Oh if anybody listened to "Good Grief" from before, I altered that song (the obvious changes are about 1/3 way through). And there's an oldy on my space that I finally got around to recording (It actually has lyrics but I'm not singing them no way). Any thoughts on Broken Pianos would be awesome thanks

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Broken Pianos

Good Grief

Cellar Door

unsungmelody · « **Reply #1 on:** April 23, 2007, 05:45:03 pm »

Cellar Door is so beautiful!!!

me and my piano---tim · « **Reply #2 on:** April 23, 2007, 10:43:23 pm »

Quote from: "unsungmelody"

Cellar Door is so beautiful!!!

Thanks! it's my favorite too.

Manny · « **Reply #3 on:** May 01, 2007, 06:02:00 am »

I really like "Good grief" seems like there were some changes. All I gotta say is that you're really talented! Keep up the good work!

me and my piano---tim · « **Reply #4 on:** May 01, 2007, 02:06:40 pm »

Quote from: "medic0803"

I really like "Good grief" seems like there were some changes. All I gotta say is that you're really talented! Keep up the good work!

Ya some gave me some advice about avoiding the repetition, and I kinda agreed. The original was basically like intro--verse1--chorus--verse1repeat--chorus--and then whatever you call that thing that goes between the chorus and the end lol--and then the chorus repeated for the ending. I changed the second verse to a different variation, as with the second chorus... then combined the two choruses in the ending. Obviously don't know any music theory or anything :lol: Thanks for listening and thanks for the input!

Manny · « **Reply #5 on:** May 01, 2007, 06:47:29 pm »

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music theory

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me and my piano---tim · « **Reply #6 on:** May 01, 2007, 11:54:12 pm »

Quote from: "medic0803"

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music theory

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my thoughts exactly.

mikepepsi · « **Reply #7 on:** May 23, 2007, 09:05:12 am »

Cellar Door is fantastic.

Zloska_of_yy · « **Reply #8 on:** August 15, 2007, 01:54:00 pm »

Damn, that sounds really impressive.

I really like Cellar Door, it makes wanna be creative and write again and that is something that I haven't felt in a long time. Is this the song for which you actually have lyrics??

itsthefiveofus · « **Reply #9 on:** August 15, 2007, 01:56:42 pm »

mmhm I think Cellar Door is awesome as well. I like all 3 but that one stands out. well for me it does.

me and my piano---tim · « **Reply #10 on:** August 16, 2007, 01:43:42 am »

Quote from: "Zloska_of_yy"

Damn, that sounds really impressive.

I really like Cellar Door, it makes wanna be creative and write again and that is something that I haven't felt in a long time. Is this the song for which you actually have lyrics??

yea, it's one of the first songs I wrote and it does have lyrics... they are kinda lame-o, but I'll post them here

Cellar Door

I stare into your eyes
And I see that you'll be my Great Demise
And surprise.
The disguise from which will arise
Amazing strength
And amazing fear
This feeling just wont disappear
The music begins and it wont ever end

Waiting
For life
For you

Tapping on your cellar door
I don't know what I'm looking for
We'll stay a pair, oh, we'll stay strong
And this will be our secret song

How long will it take?
I'll sit here and wait
For a note...something...
To make me or break me
To take me, oh, take me, take me
Take my heart and lift it up
Take my hands and shut me up
The music begins and it wont ever end

Waiting
Waiting
Waiting

Tapping on your cellar door
I don't know what I'm looking for
We'll stay a pair, oh, we'll stay strong
And this will be our secret song

Play with my heart
Rip it apart
Dump me
Love me
Break me
Repair me
Disguise and reveal me
It's me I hide
It's you inside
And I've lost my mind

Waiting
For life
For you!

Tapping on your cellar door
I don't know what I'm looking for
We'll stay a pair, oh, we'll stay strong
And this will be our secret song

And this will be our secret song.
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Zloska_of_yy · « **Reply #11 on:** August 16, 2007, 12:36:21 pm »

I really like the lyrics, they fit the atmosphere of the music very nicely. And I have to disagree about the lame part.

me and my piano---tim · « **Reply #12 on:** August 16, 2007, 01:30:20 pm »

Quote from: "Zloska_of_yy"

I really like the lyrics, they fit the atmosphere of the music very nicely. And I have to disagree about the lame part.

thanks! that's a really nice thing to say. And I guess I personally don't think they're lame... I just expect that other people will think they're lame. hmmm :?

IfICouldFall · « **Reply #13 on:** August 16, 2007, 05:30:04 pm »

^^^ I think the lyrics are great, it would be nice if we could hear the song with vocal. I'm digin Cellar Door

me and my piano---tim · « **Reply #14 on:** August 17, 2007, 02:46:02 pm »

Quote from: "IfICouldFall"

^^^ I think the lyrics are great, it would be nice if we could hear the song with vocal. I'm digin Cellar Door

thank you! I'll try and do a vocal recording sometime soon. However i am not such a talented vocalist....

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