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NoelleNC

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« on: July 19, 2007, 04:10:56 pm »
Well I didn't think I would, but I wrote another new song yesterday. I am still sort of learning it, so this recording isn't as polished as I'd like, but I was excited and wanted to record it.  There are mistakes in the recording too, I know, but it's ok!

Umm, it's not about anyone like my last song was. It's out of my imagination after initially thinking up the first two lines of the chorus. I promise I am quite happy in my relationship =) But since there are more lyrics in this song than the last and I admit I sort of mumble, here is what I'm saying...

Was it the day you said you'd never leave?
Was it the way I knew you would but I wouldn't believe?
You write the books and give the looks I can't conceive,
and here I am left on the stand alone to grieve.

Well, I sang the same song too many times.
I shouldn't have to pay for your crimes
anymore, anymore, anymore,
anymore, anymore, anymore.

Was it the way I gave you all that I had?
I asked for nothing, you said I should be glad
to have a man with such a plan and tender hands.
You didn't care, now I'm forced to understand

That I sang the same song too many times,
but I shouldn't have to pay for these crimes
anymore, anymore, anymore,
anymore, anymore, anymore.

No, no, no

The time has come, we've lain undone for too long.
But the words you wrote won't make a difference now, no.
You don't see, I don't care,
You won't see, I'm gone.

Cause I sang that same song too many times.
I shouldn't have had to pay for your crimes...
not anymore, not anymore, anymore,
anymore, anymore, anymore.

Was it the day you said you'd never leave
that I should have run back to the breeze?

http://www.myspace.com/noellebeband

^ It's the 2nd song :)
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« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2007, 10:17:08 pm »
my computer wont let me hear it ..i'm sure its good though :?
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« Reply #2 on: July 22, 2007, 07:36:49 am »
Haha, well thanks for trying! Is MySpace acting up?
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« Reply #3 on: July 22, 2007, 09:34:25 pm »
Quote from: "NoelleNC"
Is MySpace acting up?


ya for me it is......
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« Reply #4 on: July 22, 2007, 09:52:06 pm »
they are pretty awesome! love them! =]
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« Reply #5 on: July 23, 2007, 02:56:01 am »
it works for me...nice  8)  I like them alot!
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« Reply #6 on: July 23, 2007, 04:09:37 am »
Oh My God, Noelle! It rocks!! I really love it! I also love We All Said So!!!
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« Reply #7 on: July 23, 2007, 08:16:55 am »
I love this song. I love the chorus, love the bridge. Your voice sounds right angelic on the bridge. You're amazing!
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« Reply #8 on: July 23, 2007, 03:25:00 pm »
Aw thanks guys! Pete said that was his favorite part- the bridge. I'd been a little skeptical that it fit and so his liking it helped me feel like it fit, but I posted this on Hanson's forums and everyone who commented said they liked it (which was nice hehe) but that the bridge part was "awkward". I guess it sort of is, and I might be able to play it in such a way that it fits better, but I think it's not completely out of place! I think of it as the part of forlorn reminiscing in the song before the person finally makes up her mind that she is fed up beyond reconcile.  

Thanks for all the responses :)
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« Reply #9 on: July 23, 2007, 08:28:05 pm »
noelle, i like your hair, its pretty
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« Reply #10 on: July 24, 2007, 08:03:06 am »
Thanks! I am thinking of getting it highlighted, but I'm afraid they will give me too many!
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« Reply #11 on: July 27, 2007, 08:19:59 pm »
why dont you do it yourself then...lol
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« Reply #12 on: July 27, 2007, 09:58:35 pm »
call me crazy but you and pete look alike..lol
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« Reply #13 on: July 28, 2007, 07:28:49 am »
Haha. I might do it myself, but I'd rather go get it done somewhere professionally. They do a better job meeting the roots and minimizing the tiger stripe look than my mom does. =P

I can see how you could say we look alike. We have similar coloring and are both about the same frame size, except I'm shorter lol.
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« Reply #14 on: July 30, 2007, 03:50:15 pm »
yeah i am sure it will suit you well, you're pretty.
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