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soupdujour

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« on: September 01, 2007, 03:59:09 pm »
I don't know what to title it yet. Any suggestions?  :?

What is this feeling taking over me
This feeling of absolute misery
I want to rip my hair into shreds
Maybe pull a Britney and shave it all off

What has this world become
All we do is buy Fendi handbags
And Chanel flats
What happened to K-Mart and Walmart?

I know that love is a flower
But where is the seed?
If we cannot reap what we sow
Then maybe we should just sow what we reap

IfICouldFall

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« Reply #1 on: September 01, 2007, 05:27:40 pm »
Hey I'm sorry I came off with a little attitude in the Recent Pictures thread, but I feel that you really need to stop making all these unnecessary and sometimes rude posts.

BTW, I love the last two lines of the poem. Beautiful.  :D

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« Reply #2 on: September 01, 2007, 05:30:42 pm »
Quote from: "IfICouldFall"
Hey I'm sorry I came off with a little attitude in the Recent Pictures thread, but I feel that you really need to stop making all these unnecessary and sometimes rude posts.

BTW, I love the last two lines of the poem. Beautiful.  :D


Awww thank you! It's alright, I think everyone thinks I'm trying to spam or something but I'm really not!! But my intention is never to be mean to anyone!  I just alwaysss feel the need to comment on like everything lol!

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« Reply #3 on: September 07, 2007, 09:47:28 pm »
That was great!
I liked the Brittany thing. LOL

And as I sit here in this dark room
All I seem to feel is light...