what should I do: 1st song I've ever shared with anyone!

[iluvvanessa]

My newest edition



All is well
You've torn me away
All is well
You've come to play
And then leave again

Why can't you just come to stay
You always leave me this way
It starts out nice and slow
And then the ache kicks in

Why must you do this
Cause me all my pain
I don't want it to turn out
Sad again

I'm giving up hope
Turning aroud leaving you behind

Harder than I thought
Cause you come back again
This game we've played
Is pulling me deeper into your trap
I think I'm gonna snap

And then

All is well
You've come and gone
All is well
it didn't have to end up this way

All is well
All is well
All is well
All is well

[VanessaCarltonMania]

i am writting as much as i can, but i dont want to rush it because i want it to sound good.

and to answer vanessacarltonmania's question, this song is dedicated to shiara, from the vcb, and all of the people who experience the pain of having a friend or family member run away.

nice!

[iluvvanessa]

Here's another song, its kinda modeled after heroes and thieves with the whole "looking for wisdom" and not knowing what path is right, and which to choose.

(Simple intro, as song progresses, music becomes more dramatic)
Walking through a forest at night
I can't seem to help but feel some fright
The moonlights captured
The path for some time
I wonder who am I

Should I chose to turn left
or do I go right
What will happen if I might
Turn around and flash frown

I'm looking for wisdom
but can't seem to find it
For I'm the seeker and wisdoms the hidden
In this game called....life

When will I find it
I'm not quite sure
A day a year a decade or two

Who, please tell me who, oh who
Can help me break this spell
I'm really going through a lot of hell

I know I'm wrong
Perhaps I've been bad
life keeps movin on
I will make through this forest
Of heroes and thieves

The choice is right in front of me
Let it be What it is
Just please point me to the path of
The heroes, not the thieves
(Dramatic outro)

[VanessaCarltonMania]

nice work!
ure reallyyy awesomee!

[iluvvanessa]

My latest edition, its titled falling. What do you think.

I'm holding on
My feet planted down firmly
I'm not falling anymore
For you're the one who needs me

The "I" turns in to we
The you goes together
All we needs eachother and nothing else
I'm holdin, holdin on

Though I don't think I'm finished
Finished falling but for now
Here I stand as the world changes
Righ in front of me

As we walk together
Down the streets we call our home
Suddenly I feel as if I'm not
So alone today

A lifelong love
Or one night stand
Please tell me who you are

For now I feel I must leave you
For the falling begins again
Will I crash and burn or return alive
I am really not sure

What's life without taking risks
A walk in the brisk
A dark path deep in the forest
we don't know what path to take

Does it lead to heroes
Or to troubled thieves
I'm sure glad we've met
And now I'm gone
Just please remember me

Ill be back can't you see
Its always gonna be
You and me

[VanessaCarltonMania]

this is cool, but i like the one that stars like: (Simple intro, as song progresses, music becomes more dramatic)
Walking through a forest at night
I can't seem to help but feel some fright
The moonlights captured
The path for some time
I wonder who am I

but this is nice too!

Check out my songs....ive added TONS more since the last time anyone's commented :lol:

[iluvvanessa]

Here's another one....

Killing me softly

You, you're killing me
Ever so softly
Your indecisivness and unwillingness
To comit to me

I am crashing
And falling off a building
Built by love and my blindness

If I fall too hard
And break my wings
Still will i get back up
And try again to open your eyes

Cause nothing is lasts forever
Our dreams are always crushed by
Truth and the evil that walks among us
Life would be to easy

Wthout the demons
who always seem to get in
My way to you

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

You're killing me
(My life is fading)
Ever so softly
(Like a candle in the rain)
I had no clue for what to do
(And I have no one to blame )
But me for falling for you

[iluvvanessa]

A good day for writing songs cause here's another song, called confusion

My life has changed
Because you're here
I've changed myself
And now I'm looking constantly in the mirror

I hate you
Go away
Come back here
I live you
What can I say to end this

My lifes gone crazy
Its shooting down the tubes
Heading into the sewer
With no way out

Its my fault, mostly, for letting you
Get to me
But that doesn't mean, doesn't mean
Your off the hook

I've broken in I'm taking my things
Packing up and leaving
Trying to find my life
Lost if found please call
There's a reward

I hate you
I love you
I'm a wreck
I'm screaming And shouting
please someone rescue me

You want in you want out
Make up your mind
I highly doubt
You want to stay

I hate you
Go away
I love you
Please stay

[LimeTwister]

Nevermind this post.

[iluvvanessa]

Here's another one I wrote this morning,

I'm capable of so much
But you won't see
You're blind to me
And someday you'll find
We were meant to be

Though I try so hard
And go out of my way
This game you play
Has gotten old (ooh)

As I grow with each empty day
My love for you fades to gray
I am slipping and melting away
Waiting for you isn't what I want to do

I am never good enough
I am ready to go to you and say

I need you
more than you'll ever know
Being without you
Is really beginning to show

My final hour is resting on you
Please tell me if I'm getting through
Please oh please do

Though I try so hard
And go out of my way
This game you play
Has grown so old

I'm standing strong
With a broken heart
I leave today
My wings have spread an I'm beginning to fly
No more turning back now
I don't know how you'll be
Without me


And here's one I meant to put up a while ago, and I could have sworn I did but I guess not.....

More than just a friend.

Todays a day
Just like all the others
I leave early
Just to see you

As I'm off to school
I see you and try to get you to notice me
But it never works out
Cause I don't think you care

No matter how hard I try
I can't ever seem to catch your eye
I know its hard to see
Cause I never show
But its true I like you

Another day the same story
I see you again but you don't see me
I feel invisible I am lost
Drifting out to sea
Come and rescue me

Its time for sadies
Guys get asked by ladies
The girl I hope for
Doesn't ask me

Alone I stay
I hate it this way
But I guess its not meant to be
You and me

And as we talk as friends
I don't think it'll ever end so we can begin
I see you smile
I wish you'd stay a while
So the moment will come up

But you're taken
I hope I'm mistaken
But there you are with him
Holding hands in the hall
God I feel so small

Todays a day just like any other
This time I hope you'll see me
As more than just a friend

[iluvvanessa]

I thought of this song at the movies, and couldn't write it down, so its not the same as my original thought, but I will change it when I can rethink of some of the lyrics...but here's what I have remembered

Titled: cry over me

I'm at the point
Where I'm losing you
I'm not sure what to do
Should I walk or run

Chorus:
Times like these make me wonder
If I hurt myself, broke a bone
Would you care enough to comfort me
Or leave me on my own
Why can't you see---

Why oh why

And so ive found
After growing older
Don't cry over someone
Who can't cry for you

What else can I say

Chorus

If I hurt myself, crawled up and die
Would you cry
Tell me know would you
Would you shed a single tear
Or turn your back and say too bad
I wish I knew all the answers

[iluvvanessa]

Here's some more

Holding me down

I'm in a place
where I should be happy
But you're dragging me down
The evil and frown are drowning me

I want to fly
But my wings are broken
I carry on once I'm healed
But break me is what you do again

I'm tired of waiting
I want to live my life
If I have to
Ill leave you behind

Holding me down
I could be touching the stars
But you've got my feet on the ground
Letting go isn't easy
But I must peel away from you

Evil comes in many
Shapes and sizes
And I must leave this demon behind
For you're ruining my life
-----
Missing you

Missing you

You haven't called haven't written
I'm worried and missin
Your sweet smile
It makes me happy bit also forgotten

You've made some new friends
But what about the old
For they are gold and I am coal
I'm not that bad, we just live far away
From eachother

I write I call
But you seem to forget it all
We shared so much
But you won't admit it
You'd rather keep it hush hush

My first time
Kissing a girl
Hapiness smiling laughing
It'll only happen once
But I feel that its a mistake

Though we live far apart
Its not that hard
To return a call, write a letter
Just let me know you're ok
cause I miss you so

Iwrite I call
But its all forgotten
I give I make an effort
But you don't

I'm not done yet
I wint give up
What we had was so special
The single kiss ill miss
What we shared ill always remember

[iluvvanessa]

This song is for a girl who recently confessed her love to me [she loves me apparently] but i dont love her back, and i am putting this in her locker today.

Audrey

I feel fake, unreal
Am I dead, living, breathing
I’m willing to bleed
Just to know I am alive

Paralyzed not knowing what to do
You say you love me
But sadly I don’t love you

I’ve tried to point it our
But you don’t catch on
But don’t worry hon
I’m not the only one
For you

Although I fee bad
That you love me
And I don’t love you back
I would simply say it
But I don’t wanna see you blue
So this song is the best I can do it

I may seem shallow
But you deserve the truth
Don’t waste your youth
Trying to impress me


Stay the same don’t ever change
Someone later down the road
Will appreciate you
Kiss the toad and he’ll be your prince
Happily ever after you will live

Just don’t ever change
Yourself for me

Audrey, Audrey, Audrey, Audrey
You’re a sweet girl
Just not for me
I don’t wanna pretend
You should get what’s real
And not whats fake

I may seem shallow
But you deserve the truth
Don’t waste your youth
Waiting for me

[davidjp]

Geez, I would be absolutely crushed if the person i liked wrote that and put it my locker.

[iluvvanessa]

This girl is freaking me out. She's kind of a stalker. She is texting me saying she lovs me. She had her friend text me...I don't even know who that person is, and she wouldn't lay off, she was liuke quizzing me and asking me all these questions...enough is enough.