Author Topic: poem  (Read 2573 times)

xxlovelyxx

  • Just a day, just an ordinary day
  • ****
  • Posts: 292
    • AOL Instant Messenger - xbutterfliesx23
    • View Profile
poem
« on: April 26, 2009, 12:42:47 pm »
Somewhere there will be  answers
Somewhere there will be people
dancing in the back of your mind.
Some of them will be deceitful,
Some of them will be coming in
But none of them are eager, to be unwind.

Again there will be  Jesus
 the one who's done it then
 the one who taught people to look and define.
There reflection will be deeper
There soul will be away from them
No one will be a keeper
Just a bomb with less  time.
   
The clouds will be weeping
 The sun igniting sin
Life will be  like a dreamer
True Love will only win.
   
Waiting for someone
to redeem them
to save and comfort them
Things will seem no longer fun

Heaven will be awaken
Bodies will be shaken
With echos returned

No one seems to have believed it
No one cared for it then
No one received it

All Lessons learned.

But underneath the covers
there eyes will discover
the path to seek the path to climb.

Where she will be there teaching
Where he will be there achieving
Leaving the world behind.

SylvanHistorian30

  • Willing and Able to... Run
  • **
  • Posts: 79
  • All I Seem to Feel is Light . . .
    • Yahoo Instant Messenger - earl_dominic_18
    • View Profile
    • bishop-myriel43 on deviantART
Re: poem
« Reply #1 on: June 27, 2009, 10:05:28 am »
It's nice, I like it.
I wish I knew better words to express how much I like this
Miracles DO happen! =)

View my literary works:
http://bishop-myriel43.deviantart.com/

xxlovelyxx

  • Just a day, just an ordinary day
  • ****
  • Posts: 292
    • AOL Instant Messenger - xbutterfliesx23
    • View Profile
Re: poem
« Reply #2 on: July 05, 2009, 05:01:51 am »
thank you ;)