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VC-Inspired Poem
« on: July 12, 2009, 05:40:53 am »
The Piano Girl
(from my account on deviantART)

Somewhere beyond that starry sky
There lives a girl with a magic eye
With which she can see, in the ordinary,
A touch of the of the magical and fantasy.

She has a talent for writing songs
Which draw larger, ever larger throngs
For a singular reason: They can hold, in  a phrase,
The emotion and aura of average days.

Her fingers tickle the ivory
And she sings of white houses, and 'your hands on me,'
And the images seen by those magical eyes,
Through the piano and voice, they mesmerize.

So hail to the chief, fans, hail to the chief,
Hail to the raven-haired palace thief,
And may the last line of this ode be:
"Blessed be Vanessa C."

(the explanation can be found at this page: http://bishop-myriel43.deviantart.com/art/The-Piano-Girl-126804910)

The palace thief part doesn't make much sense. I'll explain: people are palaces, she steals attention from your "palace."

Hope ya like it!
Miracles DO happen! =)

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Re: VC-Inspired Poem
« Reply #1 on: July 12, 2009, 11:32:13 am »
i like it. :3