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Another freaky thing by me. . . .
« on: June 02, 2003, 01:55:10 pm »
She was always a good girl
At age 18, she was
Never tired drugs
Never tried beer
Never had a cig
A virgin
Never even been kissed
She was always waiting for Mr. Right.

But, all of that changed
Love, changed it all

She fell in love
She and her fella were ingaged
A month remained before their wedding
He found someone else
He left her
She was destroyed
She was alone
Everyone had simply vanished
No one for her to talk to
No one to love her
No one anywhere
She couldn't get over him

She started smoking
She was always trashed
She was on every drug ever made
Her eyes blood shot
Her hands trebbling
Her hair in a knot
She was a mess
Love had her this way
She fell in love
She couldn't keep up with the game
She lost
He won. He left
Never again would he return

She woke up every morning in a cold sweat
Breathing faster than ever
She was still alone
In her bed she lay
A mess
Everyone said she'd get over him
How wrong they were
She was always trashed
Everyone gave up trying to help her
She was hopeless, they'd say

She died.
Alone. in her bed
Still a mess
Later that week, her lover returned
He left the other girl
He had come back to her
Only to discover her dead
She was surrounded by drugs
No one went to her funeral
Not even her lover

She was dead. All beacause of love

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Jeez
« Reply #1 on: June 04, 2003, 10:11:00 am »
Being a guy, I can tell you that no guy is worth that.
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damn
« Reply #2 on: June 04, 2003, 10:18:58 am »
that reminded me of the movie "Traffic" or something...
"The crows seemed to be calling his name thought Caw..."

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« Reply #3 on: June 04, 2003, 02:36:54 pm »
does that mean you like it? lol

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« Reply #4 on: June 04, 2003, 02:46:16 pm »
Yes Andrea, that means I liked it.

 :)
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« Reply #5 on: June 04, 2003, 02:48:33 pm »
why, thank you! :D

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Your welcome
« Reply #6 on: June 04, 2003, 02:57:24 pm »
I love giving solicited praise!  :D
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« Reply #7 on: June 04, 2003, 02:58:31 pm »
lol. Thanks again! :D :D

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yeah
« Reply #8 on: June 04, 2003, 03:02:23 pm »
You're welcome, in a solicited fashion.
Ti Amo Michelle!

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« Reply #9 on: June 04, 2003, 03:05:45 pm »
hehe. I thought this one was....odd. But I think all of my poems are odd! :D