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« on: June 02, 2003, 02:10:05 pm »
Life for her was getting harder and harder
Work was occupying all of her time
Her boyfriend hardly got to see her
They loved eachother
Tonight he was gonna purpose to her
He had everything prepared
He called her office
She answered the phone
He loved the sound of her sweet voice
She said she was on her way home
He was waiting. . . waiting
A half an hour later he called her office
He thought maybe her boss delayed her
Her secretary answered the phone
The secretary told him that his girlfriend had left twenty minutes ago
He figured she had stopped at the grocery store
Or was running low on gas
Just in case he called her cell phone
No answer
He called her cell again ten minutes later
No answer
She was half an hour late
He started to panick
Grabbed his keys off the hook
Jumped in his car
Rain came pouring down
Lightning struck
Thunder boomed
He saw her car on the side of the road
He ran over to the abandoned car
Opened the car door
A frightning sight he saw
Her dead body laying on the back seat
"Why! Why her!" He cried
Tears were streaming down his face
But you couldn't tell becasue of the rain
He held her in his arms, sobbing
He lost her, she was gone
She had been murdered
Three bullets where in her head
This all happened the night he was going to purpose to her
He planned a dinner just for the two of them
They were supposed to spend the rest of their lives together
She had been murdered
Nothing could bring her back
It was the end for her

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Murder
« Reply #1 on: June 03, 2003, 04:11:00 am »
Its a good story line... It would really hurt to go through that. :/

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« Reply #2 on: June 03, 2003, 12:15:26 pm »
thank you. Yes, it would be terrible to go through that!