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Alecs

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"Dream"
« on: June 04, 2003, 12:19:59 pm »
bored
stranded
anticipation
sick of no relation
with my devastation... of you

I sit
I have to wonder
I have to think
why is it over in a blink?

It's not my choice
or my decision
It's my thought's voice
 that I hear in my vision... of you
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« Reply #1 on: June 04, 2003, 12:43:44 pm »
nice Alecs, way better than mine
you rock!



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« Reply #2 on: June 04, 2003, 12:47:19 pm »
Your poem is great Amanda!

I wrote this one about 7 years ago. I have a little book with blank pages that I fill in from time to time. :)
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« Reply #3 on: June 04, 2003, 01:25:21 pm »
awww cool, and thanx




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« Reply #4 on: June 06, 2003, 12:39:01 pm »
:wink:
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« Reply #5 on: June 06, 2003, 12:41:17 pm »
:wink: back at Mallory
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« Reply #6 on: June 06, 2003, 12:46:53 pm »
ha ha, Okay I'm out Alecs, (me and my mom are taking the girls (my Rotts) to the park down the street)

Keep posting your poems/songs because I really like reading them.
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