---a question about the lyrics thread

[LimeTwister]

i think we will have to dub you a wise one! lol.

[Dancernl]

i think we will have to dub you a wise one! lol.

do you think katia would make that my avatar title?

[LimeTwister]

i think we will have to dub you a wise one! lol.

do you think katia would make that my avatar title?

i tried subtle hints once...it didn't work....so idk, maybe.

[Dancernl]

i think we will have to dub you a wise one! lol.

do you think katia would make that my avatar title?

i tried subtle hints once...it didn't work....so idk, maybe.

hahaha, i was only kidding.  easily added to a sig

[TSE]

i think we will have to dub you a wise one! lol.

do you think katia would make that my avatar title?

i tried subtle hints once...it didn't work....so idk, maybe.

It wasn't that subtle

[Will]

"No I promise I will never take more than I can give"

The "no" is not there. Get rid of it!

[Vultch]

Okay I did some updates...
Carnival, Papa, (and just so Will can stop twitching) Faces.

Once you guys get your demo tape CDs and get the new lyrics finalized, I'll correct those too.

[KULPDOGG]

ok, heres the songs i changed lyrics to.:

Little Mary takes a walk
with her perfect hair and a perfect heart and happy as can be
Little Mary

Mary it’s just visual I don’t think it’s real
Inside I think she’s me
well I could be wrong could be right
Don’t think it matters
Cause little Mary sings her song and wipes away her tears

Little Mary don’t you worry
perfect all around
No wounds or worries on your head
Just please come back down

Drop a line my way
you Say it Mary, say it Mary
Don’t be afraid to reveal
It’s this preconceived notion that everybody's got
That little girls are perfect and angry they are not

And little Mary don’t you worry
Perfect all around
No wounds or worries on your head
Just please come back down

Oh little Mary
Don’t you jump now
Little Mary show them who you are
Show them what you are
and Little Mary takes a fall
All the way to heaven

Her feelings always trapped inside her perfect little heart
Her image is secure
She had to do what she had to do
To keep a perfect little Mary
It’s always a perfect little Mary that falls she falls
And it’s always a perfect little Mary that falls
Mary falls

Little Mary don’t you worry
Perfect all around
No wounds or worries on your head
Just please come back down



Just a day, just an ordinary day
Just trying to get by
Just a boy, just an ordinary boy
But he was looking to the sky
And as he asked if I would come along
I started to realize
That every day he finds just what he's looking for
Like a shooting star he shines
And he said

Take my hand
Live while you can
If we walk now we will
Divide and conquer this land

as he spoke, he spoke ordinary words
though they did not feel no
For I felt what I had not felt before
And you'd swear those words could heal
And as I looked up into those eyes
His vision borrows mine
And I know he's no stranger for I feel
I've held him for all of time
And he said

Take my hand
Live while you can
And if we walk now we will
Divide and conquer this land
Divide and conquer this land
Divide and conquer this land

Please come with me
See what I see
Touch the stars for time will not flee
Time will not flee
And you must be

Just a dream, just an ordinary dream
As I wake in bed
And the boy, that ordinary boy
was it all in my head?
Did'nt he ask if I would come along?
It all seemed so real
But as I looked to the door I saw that boy
Standing there with a deal
And he said

Take my hand
Live while you can
And if we walk now we will
Divide and conquer this land
Divide and conquer this land
Divide and conquer this land

Just a day, just an ordinary day
Just trying to get by
Just a boy, just an ordinary boy
But he was looking to the sky



Floating down
an Endless river
Passing dive
Touching whatever
Never knowing where your going but still living every
Moment that counts
Stand and linger to see
Meggie Sue is free
Don’t speak
She just wants to be

Over waves
Up and down
Does not matter
She lives unbound
Consequences pose no threat for she is rising and not
Looking down.

Stand and linger to see
Meggie sue is free
Don’t speak
She just wants to be

Stand and linger to see
Meggie Sue is free
Don’t speak
She just wants to be
   

(ok i didnt really change much in that one^, but whatever :roll: )



...(burden was perfect, just needs an extra "something that comes from the inside" at the end.

And I didn't mean to be a burden
Just thought I'd share a little light
But I thought you needed to know something
Something that comes from the inside
Something that comes from the inside
Something that comes from the inside



As I leave the demons behind me
I find myself within your eyes
I didn’t seem to know what I was missing
Just seems so out of my eyesight

But now I feel like I could fly feel like I could rise up
There to where you’re calling me
No more asking why no more foolish lies
Cause I have finished falling

As I fight the shadows that disguise me
Dyin’ for these hidden ways
All that seems so far is now behind me
And I can soar while my heart is left sinking

But now I feel like I could fly feel like I could rise up
There to where you’re calling me
No more asking why no more foolish lies
Cause I have finished falling

And it's as if new old eyes have found me, ‘cause things look different than before
I've never felt so light and so free and so willing to go on no matter what I come across
Cause I will not stop pushing ‘til I have recovered what was lost

Feel like I could fly feel like I could rise up
There to where you’re calling me
No more asking why no more foolish lies
‘cause I have finished falling

Funny how the things you need will find you
The things you want will leave you wanting some more
Everything that comes along reminds you
You can either rise above or you can hit the floor

But now I feel like I could fly feel like I could rise up
There to where you’re calling me
No more asking why no more foolish lies
Cause I have finished falling

No I’m no I’m no no...i






SEE MY NEXT POST FOR DEVIL DANCE



Stumbling down a road lined with signs
It's obvious I'm in the wrong direction
But I won't stop now you know I feel fine
Just looking for some affection
And all I ask is to be able to hold on longer
And all I ask is to be able to walk on water
Walk on water

I figure it won't be long it won't be hard
just gotta get my feet back on the ground
Just gotten a hold of some unlucky cards
And I have yet to make another round
And all I ask is to be able to hold on longer
And all I ask is to be able to walk on water
Walk on water


No one lent a hand, no one laid a look upon me
Invisible to everything but blame
No, and No one cared to tell, no one dared to believe in anything
And left me to drown in this pain
And all I ask is to be able to hold on longer
And all I ask is to be able to walk on water
Walk on water





When the pressure will not fade away
When the real things starts to become fake
When you can’t recognize your own hands
Turn around and begin again

When the sky starts ripping and falling
And The horizon is no longer calling please
Don’t try to make it on emptiness
Turn around and begin again

But I have wondered about what it is all for
But I can do no more than shout
And I am still standing unsure

If your eyes become glazed with indifference
If your screaming with lips that are silent
If you can’t find light in the day
Turn around and begin again

But I have wondered about what it is all for
But I can do no more than shout
And I am still standing unsure

When you cannot find yourself anywhere
If your standing but feel your not really there
If your waiting for someone to catch you
Turn around and begin again

If you can’t seem to find what’s been to be found
In a heart that pumps rage as your only sound
If your waiting to be blown away
Turn around and begin again

But I have wondered about what it is all for
But I can do no more than shout
And I am still standing unsure

But now and then
Now and then
I wonder.






I was stained, with a role, in a day not my own
But as you walked into my life you showed what needed to be shown
And I always knew, what was right, just didn't know that I might
Peel away and choose to see with such a different sight

And I will never see the sky the same way and
I will learn to say good-bye to yesterday and
I will never cease to fly if held down and
I will always reach too high cause I've seen, cause I've seen, twilight

Never cared never wanted
Never sought to see what flaunted
So on purpose so in my face, couldn't see beyond my own place
And it was so easy not to behold what I could hold
But you taught me I could change whatever came within these shallow days

And I will, I will never see the sky the same way and
I will learn to say good-bye to yesterday and
I will never cease to fly if held down and
I will always reach too high cause I've seen, cause I've seen

As the sun shines through it pushes away and pushes ahead
It fills the warmth of blue and leaves a chill instead and
I didn't know that I could be so blind to all that is so real
But as illusion dies I see there is so much to be revealed

And I will never see the sky the same way and
I will learn to say good-bye to yesterday and
I will never cease to fly if held down and
I will always reach too high cause I've seen, cause I've seen, twilight

And I was stained, by a role, in a day not my own
But as you walked into my life you showed what needed to be shown
And I always knew, what was right
I just didn't know that I might
Peel away and choose to see with such a different sight

And I will never see the sky the same way and
I will learn to say good-bye to yesterday and
I will never cease to fly if held down and
I will always reach too high cause I've seen, cause I've seen, twilight...
(not much changed in twilight^)



I’m waiting helpless and wanting more oh
I have been here before
So what’s the next step is it up or down
Please [take] me to the door (transition point between side 1 & 2)
But there are too many faces too many faces
And I don’t know what they’re all for

So give me earthquakes and heartache
And everything that’s in-between
I just want to know what is real
Give me earthquakes and heartache
And everything that’s in-between
Cause I don’t want to fight this any more
I’m living for sure

Yi yi yi yi yi yi...

I’m on the outside and I’m peering in
But things don’t look like what they have been no
There are too many races too many races
And I don’t really want to win

So give me earthquakes and heartache
And everything that’s in between
I just want to know what is real
Give me earthquakes and heartache
And everything that’s in between
Cause I don’t want to fight this any more
I’m living for sure

I promise I will never take more than I can give
But I don’t want to play these silly games
No I just want to live so please
Take off your mask and show me all that you are
Because life is better when you are not busy playing parts.
Yes I said life is better when you are not busy playing parts.
Yes it is, life is better when you are not playing with
Faces

Give me earthquakes and heartache
And everything that’s in between
I just want to know what is real
Give me earthquakes and heartache
And everything that’s in between
Cause I don’t want to fight this any more
I’m living for sure
I’m living for sure

Why am I running I am running so far oh
Just to figure out who you all are
And there are too many questions too many questions
And all the answers seem so far

Give me earthquakes and heartache
And everything that’s in between
I just want to know what is real
Give me earthquakes and heartache
And everything that’s in between
Cause I don’t want to fight this any more
I’m living for sure
I’m living for sure yeah

Yi yi yi yi yi yi yi...
(i dont remember if  i changed anything on this or not..lol, sorry..
but i do agree that its "take" me to the door)






I have wandered far and wide
For something real something to die for
But I have found you and you do not see
All that is me all that is true and

I am more than you will see,
I am more than you will be,
I am more than you will see,
More than wanted

And As you float the flimsy surface
You should know life lies beneath it
And Don't pretend you feel what I feel for you
Live illusion and I am real

I am more than you will see,
I am more than you will be,
I am more than you will see,
More than wanted

I am more than you will see,
I am more than you will be,
I am more than you will see,
More than wanted


I know, I know you like the way
You feel when I play
I know, I know you don't really
Hear what I say
I know, I know you are waiting
For something to raid
I know, I know you wish you could be
More than you say

I have wandered far and wide
For something real something to die for
But I have found you and you do not see
All that is me all that is true and

I am more than you will see,
I am more than you will be,
I am more than you will see,
More than wanted

I am more than you will see,
I am more than you will be,
I am more than you will see,
More than wanted

More than you'll love, more than you'll hate,
more than you'll feel, more than wanted
More than you'll need, more than you'll dream,
More than you'll hear, more than wanted

More than you'll taste, more than you'll touch,
more than you'll hold, more than wanted
More than you'll crave, more than you'll cherish,
More than you'll have, more than wanted
(wanted is very different.. and by the way, this version is KICK ASS!!!!!! )




Once upon a year gone by
She saw herself give in
Every time she closed her eyes
She saw what could have been
Well nothing hurts and nothing bleeds
When covers tucked in tight
Funny when the bottom drops
How she forgets to fight... to fight

And it's one more day in paradise
One more day in paradise
One more day in paradise
One last chance to feel alright, alright

As darkness quickly steals the light
That shined within her eyes
She slowly swallows all her fear
And soothes her mind with lies
Well all she needs and all she wants
Are reasons to survive
A day in which the sun will take
Her artificial light... her light

And it's one more day in paradise
One more day in paradise
It's one more day in paradise
One last chance to feel alright... alright

Don't pretend to hold it in just let it out
Don't pretend to hold it in just let it out
Don't you try to hold it in, push it out
Don't you try to hold it in, hold it in

Once upon a year gone by
She saw herself give in
Every time she closed her eyes
She saw what could have been
   


la-dee-da! that took me a longggg time!
 :wink:

[badsrx7]

ok, heres the songs i changed lyrics to.:
Drive a line my way
you Say it Mary, say it Mary

drop a line my way.. drive doesn't really make sense.

similar to Swinder.. you'll drop another line on someone else's time.


but that's just me

[KULPDOGG]

ok, heres the songs i changed lyrics to.:
Drive a line my way
you Say it Mary, say it Mary

drop a line my way.. drive doesn't really make sense.

similar to Swinder.. you'll drop another line on someone else's time.


but that's just me

i agrEe
 

[KULPDOGG]

wait!
im changing Devil Dance again.. lol
this time i think im 100% correct
 


I can see it but you won’t
I look around you are alone
Memories they seem to fade
And I said I would stand by your side
But his side seems to be your side
Don’t let me get in the way

So you can do-si-do with the devil in the dark
And around and around you go no
Do-si-do with the devil in the dark

And desperate for a sense of self
But you only look to someone else
When the answer’s buried in your head
Grow farther from the life you crave
Grow empty with each passing day
Oblivious to every thing

But you still do-si-do with the devil in the dark
And around and around you go no
Do-si-do with the devil in the dark
Around and around you go you go

Without a way out
No screams allowed
So be still you feel fine
Don’t escape you are mine
Illusions following you fast
Reality left in the past
The floor has fallen from your feet


But you still do-si-do with the devil in the dark
And around and around you go no
Do-si-do with the devil in the dark

It’s been upon his finger all the time
All the time
You feel fine.

[Vultch]

Both lyric sites are updates and correct
http://www.blackvulture.com/vanessa/lyrics.shtml
http://www.nessaholics.com/pages/lyrics/lyrics-tapedemos.shtml

thanks kulp

[KULPDOGG]

cool, now the only song i think that hasnt been changed yet that needs to is dark carnival[finished studio version]

i posted the lyrics in this thread:
http://forum.nessaholics.com/viewtopic.php?t=4329
but those are old.




----------------here is my final draft :wink: ----------------


You never thought it'd hurt so bad
Bring me a remedy
You never thought it'd hurt so bad
Never thought it'd feel so right
Bringing you to your knees
Never thought it'd feel so right

It's the edge of the dawn
When she looks in your eyes
And she wants what is hers
Before the light

And she runs on her own
And you'll hurt before you know
Not a sweet alibi
When you get your bloody dose
In the still of the night
It is there you'll feel it most
In this dark carnival
Where the end is close

(I'll tell you it won't hurt)
Never thought i'd hurt so bad
Funny how the story ends
Remember the beginning
Funny how the story ends
Should never have looked so close
(Should never have looked so close)
I can see all your cracks
Should never have looked so close

It's the edge of the dawn
When she looks in your eyes
And she wants
What is hers
Before the light
And she runs on her own
And you'll hurt before you know
Not a sweet alibi
When you get your bloody dose
In the still of the night
It is there you'll feel it most
In this dark carnival
Where the end is close


[laughter]
...and we'll fight to the death
(Tell me it won't hurt)
...everyone has an hour
...and the weapons
(Tell me it won't hurt)
...so we'll fight to the death
...now it is final
(Tell me it won't hurt)
...for what?
(Tell me it won't hurt)
...who knows?
Tell me it won't...


And she runs on her own
And you'll hurt before you know
Not a sweet alibi
When you get your bloody dose
In the still of the night (of the night)
It is there you'll feel it most
In this dark carnival
Where the end is close

Tell me it won't hurt
(I'll tell you it wont hurt)
Give me a remedy
Give me a remedy
I'll tell you it wont hurt
I'll tell you it wont hurt

--------------------------------------------

[Vultch]

cool, now the only song i think that hasnt been changed yet that needs to is dark carnival[finished studio version]

i posted the lyrics in this thread:
http://forum.nessaholics.com/viewtopic.php?t=4329
but those are old.
----------------here is my final draft :wink: ----------------

thanks! done

[Jophess]

On Burden on BV and the Nessaholic's site it says "Don't grow bored to quickly". I smell a grammatical error. It's "too quickly".

:wink: