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A poem i wrote at school
« on: November 25, 2003, 01:07:30 pm »
You say you love me
you know what you said
i dont believe myself
i love the way you give urself to me

You make me feel that way
you say we'll be together soemday
my love you are addictive

now...
lets get down to this
id love to be with u
this is my last chance to say
i love you that way

ITS HORRIBLE!!
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« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2003, 02:10:46 pm »
It's not horrible!!
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Re: Poem
« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2003, 02:16:20 pm »
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It's not horrible!!


I thought that was a line  :?







hehehe 'twas kidding
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Re: Poem
« Reply #3 on: November 26, 2003, 11:58:13 am »
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hehehe 'twas kidding


It shouldn't be 'twas. :P

Unless it was kidding. It . . . It . . .

*shuts up*
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Re: Poem
« Reply #4 on: November 26, 2003, 06:34:10 pm »
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hehehe 'twas kidding


It shouldn't be 'twas. :P

Unless it was kidding. It . . . It . . .

*shuts up*


It was kidding!

You see, kidding was used as a noun.  Gerund!  Ohhh yes, a gerund is when you use  an -ing verb as a noun!
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A poem i wrote at school
« Reply #5 on: November 27, 2003, 06:40:12 pm »
I know what a gerund is. What - You think I go to Public School or something?

:X :X :X :X

Welllllllllll . . . Why'd you use a gerund when you could have just gone and said, "I was kidding?"

Hmmm? Hmmm? HMMM?!?!?!

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« Reply #6 on: November 29, 2003, 08:31:49 am »
i like your icon

i know im the master of the moth for randomness but lol ooh well
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