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Chloe

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« on: May 03, 2004, 05:23:50 pm »
just a short one...

In his eyes i've seen my sky
In my dreams, i've held him a thousand times
I wish he knew what he means to me
But i get the feeling he'll never ever see
How much he makes my heart bleed
It's like he doesn't know I'm there
He wouldn't even hear me if i was screaming
sometimes i wonder why i waste my time
but i'm afraid if i run away he won't follow me
I need to get over this
Before it decays what's left of me

Things are going crazy and I'm not sure who to blame...
November 9th 2004...H a r m o n i u m!!!
Spare me just three last words, I love you is all she heard...

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« Reply #1 on: May 04, 2004, 06:45:37 am »
:cry:
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« Reply #2 on: May 05, 2004, 10:14:37 am »
I like the way it doesn't rhyme the whole way through.
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« Reply #3 on: May 05, 2004, 10:21:52 am »
I'm with T, makes you so tearful! That is soo powerful Chloe, nice work!!!

xox

Thank so much for the sig Scotty!! <3 It's gorgeous!

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« Reply #4 on: May 05, 2004, 02:24:02 pm »
thanks guys...  :)

Rosie... yeah i just noticed that! hmmm...

Things are going crazy and I'm not sure who to blame...
November 9th 2004...H a r m o n i u m!!!
Spare me just three last words, I love you is all she heard...

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« Reply #5 on: May 05, 2004, 03:14:29 pm »
OMG!! BEAUTIFULL!  :cry:

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« Reply #6 on: May 10, 2004, 08:39:32 am »
sad but great poetry :)
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