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Missed Chance

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« on: June 05, 2004, 11:15:21 am »
Missed Chance

You drive me oh so crazy.
You cause me minor pain.
I’m not sure if you like me,
And it’s driving me insane.
Your face is always with me.
I hear your voice at night.
I think that you might like me,
But I’m not sure if I’m right.
I’m to scared to tell you,
The feelings in my heart.
If you don’t feel the same way,
Then I might just fall apart.
So I’ll just go on wondering,
If you feel the way I feel.
I’ll just keep asking myself,
If what I think is there is real.
I wish I had the courage,
To ask you for that dance.
But now I’ve come to realize,
That I may have missed my chance.


-Liz aka Missed  Chance
~*~Beauty in Simplicity~*~

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« Reply #1 on: June 06, 2004, 10:24:30 am »
That's awesome!! I think you should go for it :wink:
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« Reply #2 on: June 06, 2004, 11:27:04 am »
great job! I liked the rythim of it, with the rimes u chose.
it flows well ;)

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« Reply #3 on: June 06, 2004, 03:36:13 pm »
Thank you!
-Liz :)
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