Author Topic: This feeling (Read 2443 times)

drumpad · « **on:** June 25, 2004, 07:04:42 pm »

Can't explain how I felt,
When I got the news
felt like the death of a close friend
I had to sit back and take a couple of breaths
A million images shot through my mind
At a speed that would make Superman envious.
Is it true?
Is what you said really true?
Am I hearing it wrong?
Did I catch that right?
Calm down heart, calm down
Tryin' to tell myself
"Everything's gonna be alright"
Catch my breath
...Breathe in...Breathe out...Breathe in
reeling from the shock the reality sets in...
I'm no longer #1 in your eyes anymore

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Tia · « **Reply #1 on:** June 26, 2004, 05:20:20 am »

:cry:

Very good, but very depressing!

drumpad · « **Reply #2 on:** June 30, 2004, 08:55:52 am »

yea it was one of those moments, like someting u would catch on camera. the feeling happen to be there, so i captialized on it and wrote this poem

Alecs · « **Reply #3 on:** June 30, 2004, 09:09:00 am »

yeah I know that feeling. I wrote about times like that. Oh the agony of being in love with someone who is done with you or cheated on you... It's a beaaaaatch.

babyblue43402 · « **Reply #4 on:** July 01, 2004, 07:27:33 pm »

ouch!

vanessafan18 · « **Reply #5 on:** July 02, 2004, 12:19:22 am »

Quote from: "Tia"

:cry:

Very good, but very depressing!

I agree, very good writing indeed, but tear worthy :cry: xxx

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Author Topic: This feeling (Read 2443 times)