Author Topic: afternoons  (Read 5991 times)

snapple936

  • Just a day, just an ordinary day
  • ****
  • Posts: 374
    • AOL Instant Messenger - Snapple936
    • View Profile
afternoons
« on: July 09, 2004, 04:09:53 pm »
there's a little bit of me still wedged
in between your walls, the seats of your car
reminders of those afternoons with our sunglasses
and lazy naps lulled by the rain

but let it stream by you
this passage of time is not as easy to grasp
as the picture frames that we left behind
and everybody knows what this feels like
this is freedom, this is hard, this is nothing we'd want to do again

and i admit that there's still a bit of you
an ounce of you in my mind
when i play the counting crows and when i lay in bed
and when the phone rings i pretend
sometimes i pretend that you're calling me again
...i'd rather laugh with the sinners than cry with the saints, the sinners are much more fun, you know that only the good

LimeTwister

  • Guest
afternoons
« Reply #1 on: July 09, 2004, 07:47:40 pm »
I love it.

PIBby

  • You never thought it'd hurt so bad
  • *****
  • Posts: 2883
    • MSN Messenger - ckdurbin@hotmail.com
    • AOL Instant Messenger - IWanted19ButGot2
    • View Profile
    • http://hometown.aol.com/sanchezhouse/
    • Email
afternoons
« Reply #2 on: July 09, 2004, 08:04:45 pm »
OH MY GOD.

That last bit made my heart stop! Like, when I listened to This Brilliant Dance the first time. Or Konstantine.

That was incredibly good, Kelley. And I'm not even joking.

Kudos. Kudos. Kudos.

snapple936

  • Just a day, just an ordinary day
  • ****
  • Posts: 374
    • AOL Instant Messenger - Snapple936
    • View Profile
afternoons
« Reply #3 on: July 09, 2004, 08:34:25 pm »
thanks guys... i don't even know why i posted it. kinda a whim thing.  cece you make my day!!!!!!!!!!


kelley
...i'd rather laugh with the sinners than cry with the saints, the sinners are much more fun, you know that only the good

PIBby

  • You never thought it'd hurt so bad
  • *****
  • Posts: 2883
    • MSN Messenger - ckdurbin@hotmail.com
    • AOL Instant Messenger - IWanted19ButGot2
    • View Profile
    • http://hometown.aol.com/sanchezhouse/
    • Email
afternoons
« Reply #4 on: July 09, 2004, 08:35:28 pm »
NO.

That was SO good.

Tia

  • Speeding into the horizon
  • *****
  • Posts: 4783
    • MSN Messenger - littlemisscheekylives@hotmail.com
    • View Profile
    • http://www.graphic-interlude.com
    • Email
afternoons
« Reply #5 on: July 10, 2004, 03:08:15 am »
Awesome! Amazing! Brilliant!!
The distance between insanity and genius is measured only by success.

snapple936

  • Just a day, just an ordinary day
  • ****
  • Posts: 374
    • AOL Instant Messenger - Snapple936
    • View Profile
afternoons
« Reply #6 on: July 10, 2004, 09:04:41 am »
thank you so much!!!!

kelley
...i'd rather laugh with the sinners than cry with the saints, the sinners are much more fun, you know that only the good

Tia

  • Speeding into the horizon
  • *****
  • Posts: 4783
    • MSN Messenger - littlemisscheekylives@hotmail.com
    • View Profile
    • http://www.graphic-interlude.com
    • Email
afternoons
« Reply #7 on: July 10, 2004, 09:18:23 am »
De nada <3
The distance between insanity and genius is measured only by success.

drumpad

  • Just a day, just an ordinary day
  • ****
  • Posts: 254
    • View Profile
afternoons
« Reply #8 on: July 10, 2004, 07:59:15 pm »
it's pimp

I reall like it.
 ---"poot slap, poot slap, dawg with that thump"

snapple936

  • Just a day, just an ordinary day
  • ****
  • Posts: 374
    • AOL Instant Messenger - Snapple936
    • View Profile
afternoons
« Reply #9 on: July 10, 2004, 08:36:08 pm »
you're pimp.
and sometimes i really like you!

kelley

EDIT- see how i totally switched that around on you? haha
...i'd rather laugh with the sinners than cry with the saints, the sinners are much more fun, you know that only the good

drumpad

  • Just a day, just an ordinary day
  • ****
  • Posts: 254
    • View Profile
afternoons
« Reply #10 on: July 11, 2004, 06:20:45 pm »
just sometimes? :?
 ---"poot slap, poot slap, dawg with that thump"

Jophess

  • Keepin' secrets at midnight
  • *****
  • Posts: 3641
    • View Profile
    • Twitter
    • Email
afternoons
« Reply #11 on: July 12, 2004, 08:02:21 am »
Very nicely done!
Joe

PIBby

  • You never thought it'd hurt so bad
  • *****
  • Posts: 2883
    • MSN Messenger - ckdurbin@hotmail.com
    • AOL Instant Messenger - IWanted19ButGot2
    • View Profile
    • http://hometown.aol.com/sanchezhouse/
    • Email
afternoons
« Reply #12 on: July 16, 2004, 05:57:54 pm »
I'm still in awe, Kelley. Seriously.

snapple936

  • Just a day, just an ordinary day
  • ****
  • Posts: 374
    • AOL Instant Messenger - Snapple936
    • View Profile
afternoons
« Reply #13 on: July 17, 2004, 02:04:56 pm »
all the time corey, all the time :-)


and cece, thanks so much. you made everyday a happy one!!!!!1 hahahah and thanks for the pm.
...i'd rather laugh with the sinners than cry with the saints, the sinners are much more fun, you know that only the good

PIBby

  • You never thought it'd hurt so bad
  • *****
  • Posts: 2883
    • MSN Messenger - ckdurbin@hotmail.com
    • AOL Instant Messenger - IWanted19ButGot2
    • View Profile
    • http://hometown.aol.com/sanchezhouse/
    • Email
afternoons
« Reply #14 on: July 17, 2004, 02:08:56 pm »
You're welcome! We need to write our BOOK! About nooks! And cooks! And looks! And hooks! And . . . :\