Since the author of thread said it was uninteresting from a nessaholics standpoint, I assumed that's what was wanted for the site.
You can change it all you want. Like i said, I was just doing what was requested in the first post.
Um...well, I actually just said of the article: "it's terribly barren, boring, and un-informative (from a Nessaholic perspective)"--meaning that there's not a lot of content in the article at all, and although someone going through the encyclopedia wouldn't necessarily need to know all of what's in your edit (which I think is great, by the way), it certainly could be made to be a lot more informative. Sorry for any confusion I caused :oops:
Will's right, though, it's not quite as neutral as an encyclopedia article should be. I do think that the "Nessa kicks ass" message in it is pretty subtle, and artfully done, but still strong enough that "wikipedians" would object. But it's certainly a
whole lot better than what was there before...
