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VaderDawsn

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Ode To An APATHETIC KNAVE
« on: August 07, 2004, 09:06:23 am »
ODE TO AN APATHETIC KNAVE


O apathetic knave, with the golden brown eyes.
Go on and pull the cape swiftly over their eyes.
You doth feign care only for those that can get you somewhere.
You shall pay the price for your lack of foresight.

O apathetic knave, with strong arms.
Superficially you appear to be tough.
However, you are just a weak coward, hobbling along.
They'll see right through your mask sooner or later.

O apathetic knave, perhaps someday the tables will turn.
You shall feel a burn, a prick, perhaps a twinge.
Till then, play on o apathetic knave.
-Samantha

For me it's a glance
And a smile on your face
A touch of your hands
An honest embrace - VC, Home

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Ode To An APATHETIC KNAVE
« Reply #1 on: October 12, 2004, 01:33:59 pm »
You're really good! I love people who write and remind me of Shakespeare, mainly because I can't write like that. Do you have more posted on here? Well, I suppose I'll go check!

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« Reply #2 on: October 16, 2004, 12:48:43 pm »
Quote from: "dconfessional"
You're really good! I love people who write and remind me of Shakespeare, mainly because I can't write like that. Do you have more posted on here? Well, I suppose I'll go check!


aww, thanks I'm glad you liked it:-)  This is the only poem I've written in that type of style that I can recall... I've written tons of stuff, but i've only posted 2 things on this board so far....
-Samantha

For me it's a glance
And a smile on your face
A touch of your hands
An honest embrace - VC, Home