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str84vanessa

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« on: October 13, 2004, 04:37:26 pm »
Okay, I just wrote this song in Spanish class the other day because I was really bored...but here it is anyway:

"Undead"

Sitting on a bed
Thinking about the things in his head.
Wonders when his shell will break,
Or how much news they can take.

It's a secret he just can't keep.
Someday he knows he'll wake from this sleep.

He's finally undead
Now its all done and said
This hole is now a mountain,
But he still feels so deep.
He's finally undead.

Laughing with his friends--
They all knew it would happen in the end.
He's made it through this strife
And now his soul is back to life

He's finally undead
Now its all done and said
This hole is now a mountain,
But he still feels so deep.
He's finally undead.


But mothers...
...Don't understand the others.
He's poured some coffee in her cup.
It's her choice to sip it up.

It's a secret he just couldn't keep.
He knew that he would wake from his sleep.

He's finally undead
Now its all done and said
This hole is now a mountain,
But he still feels so deep.
He's finally undead.

So he must move on with himself.
Take his feelings off the shelf.
He's got a new mind in his head.
Because his finally...
...finally...FINALLY

...un----dead.

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« Reply #1 on: October 16, 2004, 07:45:32 am »
I normally don't comment on stuff in here, but this title intrigued me...I like the concept of someone being "undead" (haha, of course, me being the Dracula freak that I am), however, you're probably talking about something a bit more than the literal idea of undeath, are you not? :)

str84vanessa

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no....
« Reply #2 on: October 18, 2004, 08:56:37 am »
no, it's not literal. It's about a boy's coming out experience