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« on: October 20, 2004, 04:02:42 pm »
There she goes again
Racing through his mind
She's the dream he secretly wishes he could find
She looks to him so sadly
Her heart tries not to sing
Deep inside she knows
He wants her to be his queen
There's secrets in the meadow
Hidden in the morning dew
Sweet perfumes keep sweetening
The sky in which they flew
The sun goes down so softly
She heard his boyish voice
Calling her back from the past
Brought on by her bad choice
He wants so bad to take it back
The pain he made her feel
When the flowers in the meadow died
And her nightmare became real
And now he tries to call to her
His lady, to come home
But she remembers all his lies
And leaves him all alone

Things are going crazy and I'm not sure who to blame...
November 9th 2004...H a r m o n i u m!!!
Spare me just three last words, I love you is all she heard...

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« Reply #1 on: October 20, 2004, 04:09:27 pm »
Chloe, that was beautiful 8O
*natalie*



at least i can say
i was not afraid
i loved you all the way
i'd pick the fool any day.

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« Reply #2 on: October 20, 2004, 04:45:47 pm »
I have tears in my eyes! Brilliant!
-Samantha

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A touch of your hands
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« Reply #3 on: October 20, 2004, 05:26:12 pm »
:D thanks you guys!! Nat inspired me to sit down and try and write something cause her work is awesome too. :)

Things are going crazy and I'm not sure who to blame...
November 9th 2004...H a r m o n i u m!!!
Spare me just three last words, I love you is all she heard...

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« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2004, 05:28:36 pm »
Quote from: "AFallingStar"
:D thanks you guys!! Nat inspired me to sit down and try and write something cause her work is awesome too. :)

 8O
Thanks!!!!!
*natalie*



at least i can say
i was not afraid
i loved you all the way
i'd pick the fool any day.

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« Reply #5 on: October 21, 2004, 11:33:49 am »
Nice rhythm. I like :)
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« Reply #6 on: October 24, 2004, 05:44:04 pm »
depressing but good! I know that feeling from both sides of the story. It sux. :cry:
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« Reply #7 on: October 24, 2004, 05:45:13 pm »
yes, it does suck. lol


thanks guys!!!

Things are going crazy and I'm not sure who to blame...
November 9th 2004...H a r m o n i u m!!!
Spare me just three last words, I love you is all she heard...