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« on: November 18, 2004, 02:56:37 pm »
Maybe if I start another topic, people will reply?

Truth-
I sit alone and listen to my heart
You sing along inside
And you twist my words to knots
My mind is hollow
But you revive me, and refuse to leave

The sun is setting on the horizon
Waiting to wake the world
You'd swim the oceans to catch it
To keep it from breaking the night
But it's already bleeding across the sky

You hear my words whisper with the wind
And you know that you hear truth
The truth in the tender words that you can't grasp
The meaning is a mystery to you and with whom you share
But my eyes will whisper truth
If you can ever find me.


November 16, 2004


PLEASE, can someone tell me how it is!!!!!

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« Reply #1 on: November 20, 2004, 04:52:16 pm »
i liked it alot!  8)

Things are going crazy and I'm not sure who to blame...
November 9th 2004...H a r m o n i u m!!!
Spare me just three last words, I love you is all she heard...

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« Reply #2 on: November 21, 2004, 02:05:54 pm »
Thank you! Your the first person to ever reply to my poems!

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« Reply #3 on: December 06, 2004, 08:12:42 pm »
awesome! :D
say you'd come and stop the rain...